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DaddysTastyTreat
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Hello,
I am currently working on a trilogy in the incest/taboo genre. The first installment can be found by clicking the link in my signature labled "My Writings".
The first piece had a coy, teasing feel to it. I'm hoping the second does as well.
I am not yet done writing the second installment. I am about a third to halfway through.
I would like a second pair of eyes to go through what I have written so far. If you could tell me whether or jot the voice of the piece matches the first, I'd be delighted.
Also, if you could tell me whether or not I have constructed the characters with enough depth, that'd be excellent.
I am also looking for direction in terms of scenes one might want in the story. For example; a scene that adds depth to relationships between Fern, the main character, and her friends, parents, other characters, etc.
I'd be happy to e-mail a copy of the piece as it is now.
Thanks!
-Effie
I am currently working on a trilogy in the incest/taboo genre. The first installment can be found by clicking the link in my signature labled "My Writings".
The first piece had a coy, teasing feel to it. I'm hoping the second does as well.
I am not yet done writing the second installment. I am about a third to halfway through.
I would like a second pair of eyes to go through what I have written so far. If you could tell me whether or jot the voice of the piece matches the first, I'd be delighted.
Also, if you could tell me whether or not I have constructed the characters with enough depth, that'd be excellent.
I am also looking for direction in terms of scenes one might want in the story. For example; a scene that adds depth to relationships between Fern, the main character, and her friends, parents, other characters, etc.
I'd be happy to e-mail a copy of the piece as it is now.
Thanks!
-Effie