Sinisterotica20001
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- Feb 3, 2018
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Hi everyone,
I took a stab at a CFNM story, and I'd love some feedback. I have received a few comments already telling me to move more quickly from the teasing to action stage, although I actually like the kinky buildup and sort of consider it action.
https://www.literotica.com/s/slave-to-my-older-sisters-ch-01
I've submitted chapters 2 and 3 for publishing and hope they'll be accepted and published soon. Chapter 2 is a bit like 1, and 3 gets a lot more hardcore. I think I'm going to write one more then end it.
If CFNM humiliation and incest aren't your thing, you may want to skip it.
In any case, I'm open to hearing constructive criticism.
Thank you.
I took a stab at a CFNM story, and I'd love some feedback. I have received a few comments already telling me to move more quickly from the teasing to action stage, although I actually like the kinky buildup and sort of consider it action.
https://www.literotica.com/s/slave-to-my-older-sisters-ch-01
I've submitted chapters 2 and 3 for publishing and hope they'll be accepted and published soon. Chapter 2 is a bit like 1, and 3 gets a lot more hardcore. I think I'm going to write one more then end it.
If CFNM humiliation and incest aren't your thing, you may want to skip it.
In any case, I'm open to hearing constructive criticism.
Thank you.