Editor for completed fantasy style stories

sinfulwritings · Aug 22, 2017

Hi there!

I have a couple of fantasy stories that involve themes such as mind control etc, I'd be interested in someone helping me go over them to ensure they're up to Literotica's style standards, as the first one I submitted was rejected based on style problems that I'm not very good at fixing.

First story is a fantasy elven warrior goes up against a werewolf she's not prepared for and loses in a fantastic way, second story is a more modern story; college girl summons a succubus that turns on her.

Cheers for any help offered, feel free to PM me for the raw files!

HeyAll · Aug 22, 2017

I can give you brief pointers on style if you want to make sure youre properly formatted

sinfulwritings · Aug 25, 2017

Hey thanks for the offer! Honestly I'm just really, really bad at editing my own work and could really use someone else's help!

EquinoxRising · Aug 25, 2017

sinfulwritings said:
Hi there!

I have a couple of fantasy stories that involve themes such as mind control etc, I'd be interested in someone helping me go over them to ensure they're up to Literotica's style standards, as the first one I submitted was rejected based on style problems that I'm not very good at fixing.

First story is a fantasy elven warrior goes up against a werewolf she's not prepared for and loses in a fantastic way, second story is a more modern story; college girl summons a succubus that turns on her.

Cheers for any help offered, feel free to PM me for the raw files!

One bit of advice... Succubi go after men. Incubi go after women.

Blind_Justice · Aug 26, 2017

Unless she's a lesbian, of course.

sinfulwritings · Aug 26, 2017

I mean, the basic Idea is succubi are more feminine and incubi are more masculine...

It's a feminine sex demon, no reason for it to distinguish between the sexes, in my opinion anyway

EquinoxRising · Aug 26, 2017

It depends if you adhere to the lore surrounding succubi or if you plan to ignore them and invent your own thing.

sinfulwritings · Aug 27, 2017

.... Suuuuuure. It's fantasy, your view of what succubi are in normal fantasy is clearly different to mine.

Also, it's my story, who cares if I keep to "normal" lore or invent my own

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