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Old 11-13-2016, 09:55 AM   #3251
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Heather's Story

Heather's Story Ch. 01

About a year ago I posted my first story to LIT. It was supposed to be a standalone, but I left a cliffhanger at the end, just in case. It got relatively positive reviews and turned into a three chapter series with no satisfying conclusion.

I found I had written myself into a corner where there were no characters other than the main three, and, thus, nowhere for the plot to go.

And I love plot.

So I rewrote. And rewrote. This is chapter 1 (which includes Ch. 01 and half of 2 from the original). I have two more installments pending, all at the same length and another two in the pipe pending rewrite.

This is much more heavily plot driven (though there is a lot of sex), and I would be interested in what you have to say about it.

If anyone is wondering where the original story is, the site admins would not re-publish the same story so I needed to take the old ones down.
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Old 11-16-2016, 03:03 PM   #3252
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New story, the first in years! Fuckboy Billy Ch. 01
It's the first chapter of a gay BDSM story.
Edited by the fantastic MadamWhitewalker.
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Old 11-18-2016, 04:46 AM   #3253
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Mumbai Mix Ch. 02

Hi all, the second part of my story about a Brit and a young Indian woman has been published. You can find it here:
https://www.literotica.com/s/mumbai-mix-ch-02
In this part Mark and Kriti's relationship goes to a new level, I submitted it in the Anal category, although of course the interracial element runs through it!
Chapter 1 is currently ranked hot, so do take a look if it appeals!
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Old 11-22-2016, 06:11 AM   #3254
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https://www.literotica.com/s/whitewash-high-ch-12

Chapter 12 up and live. Enjoy!
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Old 11-26-2016, 02:17 AM   #3255
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...'s story is up, and found right here—sequel to "The Babysitter": https://www.literotica.com/s/the-babysitter-ch-02-6 Enjoy, happy readin'.
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Old 11-26-2016, 02:18 AM   #3256
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To Wear The Horns

Chapter 2 of To Wear the Horns is now live!
https://www.literotica.com/s/to-wear...d-family-pt-02

And if you missed chapter 1, here you go https://www.literotica.com/s/to-wear...d-family-pt-01

As a content warning, it's full of incest, cuckolding (I know, who could guess from that title?), pegging, watersports, chastity and gorgeous fat women.
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Old 11-27-2016, 02:16 AM   #3257
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Other Colors - chapters 23-24

Two new chapters are up. A D/s romance with a slow, sensuous build. I've been working on this story for years. Hope you enjoy it, and feedback is always appreciated!

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Old 12-02-2016, 03:18 AM   #3258
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From "Christmas With the Devil":

Jolly old Saint Nicholas had one last job to do that evening. A job he dreaded.

He stood at an iron door in the side of a mountain at the top of the world, lifting an old, rusted key from around his neck and wondering if he really had to go through with it. Maybe this year, just for once, he could skip this particular chore...

But no. He shook his head, spilling snow from his crown of ivy. He was obligated to be charitable to everyone in need. And what soul needed charity more than this one?

The door's ancient hinges were still strong after nearly 1,700 years, and they made a stubborn squealing noise as they opened. Once open, the moonlight spilled in, revealing a barren cell and a most singular prisoner, a hairy beast with horns and hooves, a kind of blasphemous man-goat. Even the ever-compassionate Saint Nicholas winced at the sight of the creature. Iron chains bound this prisoner from head to hoof.

They looked at each other in silence for a moment as snow drifted to the ground outside. Saint Nick cleared his throat. "Well, Christmas has come again, you old sinner" said the saint, trying to maintain his customary cheer. "You know what that means."

The great gray goat held out his wrists. Saint Nicholas fiddled with the big key, trying to make it fit the locks. "Try to do some good this year?" he said as he worked at them. "Maybe help someone, if you can manage it?"

The chained figure only shrugged in reply. He wasn't the type to make promises, even on a special occasion like this.

With a sigh, Saint Nicholas unfastened the locks. Free at last, the Beast of the Yuletide let out a hearty growl, stretched his legs, winked at Saint Nicholas, and, laying his finger aside of his nose, leapt out into the dark, snowy night.

Saint Nick grumbled as the horned figure vanished. "I'm just a bleeding heart, that's my problem," he said. "One of these days it's going to get me into trouble."


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Old 12-04-2016, 04:56 AM   #3259
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Chapter 13. Enjoy!
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Old 12-06-2016, 07:56 PM   #3260
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I've written two new installments of "All the Power," and a brief story outlining some of the background. It's a BDSM-y harem fantasy and a lot of what you need to know about it is in the title. I've tried to build out the world and get more character stuff in the newer installments. It would probably help if you read the background first (and, frankly, if you have a something of a fetish for deepthroat blowjobs).

https://www.literotica.com/s/all-the...-of-background
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Old 12-07-2016, 05:30 AM   #3261
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Fire, Grey

Two new short stories from a new author.

Fire
He doesn't see red when he finally catches up with her
https://www.literotica.com/s/fire-34

Grey
People don't get fairytale endings, and rainbows eventually fade to grey.
https://www.literotica.com/s/grey-6

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Old 12-08-2016, 06:29 PM   #3262
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New author, first story

I have a short piece, and am trying out literotica as an author for the first time. I'd be very pleased for people to check it out! https://www.literotica.com/s/freshman-first-experience
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Old 12-13-2016, 10:04 AM   #3263
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https://www.literotica.com/s/whitewash-high-ch-14

Chapter 14. Some nice fun before the Christmas holidays.
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Old 12-15-2016, 04:49 AM   #3264
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Old 12-28-2016, 12:47 AM   #3265
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Next story is up, "Imperfect Strangers," and you can find it right here: https://literotica.com/s/imperfect-strangers Cheers, Merry Christmas, Happy New Year, and enjoy, all.
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Old 12-28-2016, 01:07 PM   #3266
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The Blackmail

Not exactly a new story. I rewrote some parts, added some new things and changed things around a bit.

Any feedback is welcome, although there still is a problem with submitting comments on the story itself. Please PM me or post on my old feedback request thread. Thank you.

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Old 12-31-2016, 12:35 PM   #3267
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https://www.literotica.com/s/whitewash-league-ch-01

Chapter 1 of a new series with new twists on established characters.
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Old 01-01-2017, 10:23 PM   #3268
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Wink Settling In

Happy New Years!

This is my very first submission.

The story takes place between two main characters and involves gay romance, sex, and drama all within a dynamic college setting. The first chapter is currently ranked hot and the second installment is actually submitted and pending for approval.

I'm almost finished with the third and I plan on keeping this story updated regularly as I've already written quite a lot of it. Hope you enjoy!

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Old 01-05-2017, 04:54 AM   #3269
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Old 01-06-2017, 04:51 AM   #3270
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Futanari themed story. A mother finds out that one of her daughter's friends is a futanari, and that she needs to join her harem to protect her daughter.
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Old 01-23-2017, 07:04 PM   #3271
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Chapter 2 of the League is up and live. Enjoy!

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Old 01-25-2017, 04:57 PM   #3272
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Talking Long Time Reader Turned Writer. Check out Lexi and Nikki.

Does anyone still read these updates?

As I wait for my 7th story to be published (been languishing in "Pending" since the 21st) I thought I might toot my own horn and see what other thought of the two series I've begun.

Both series have enough plot to keep the story going but, each installment can be read on their own — as a free standing tale of romance, lust and first times. Lots of relationship and people dynamics are woven into very detailed and fun descriptions of the sexual act.

I'm also trying to write at least one chapter from the female perspective for every three from the male perspective. Female readers, please let me know if I'm off base about any details when I do this (re: writing from a female perspective - as a man.)

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NIKKI SERIES:
The Nikki Series is about Nikki and Max. Both are healthy well-adjusted twenty-somethings, on the cusp of 30, who are pushing their sexual boundaries.

An excerpt:
"Like a machine built for only one purposed my hips bucked and moved back and forth like a well-oiled piston. Each plunge displaced more and more of Nikki's sweet juices until translucent ribbons revolved around my cock like a may pole. She had her first orgasm."

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LEXI SERIES:
The Lexi Series is about Andrew and Lexi. Andrew is an aspiring writer who doesn't care about material wealth. Lexi is his former landlord turned lover — a MILF if you will. She is financially set after her divorce but, longs for a more human connection. What they share is a mutual lust for each other's bodies. But what happens when Andrew realizes he needs more from Lexi?

An excerpt:
"She had a way of cocking her head and giving you a "look" that would stop traffic. That was usually followed by a wide smile and a sparkle in her eye that let you know everything she was thinking was pure mischief. Even now, after a year of trysts and public couplings, she looked dynamite. The fact that I could never wait to be deep in her and her embrace, was a testament to what a sensual woman she was. Sure she was old enough to be my mother but, I've never wanted to fuck my mother."

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THE STORIES
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Old 01-29-2017, 02:06 AM   #3273
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First Smokey Saga of the new year is up, and found right here: https://literotica.com/s/cumming-cleansed-day-one It's a request from a particular Reader, the first chapter of what I’m sure will become many in this storyline. Enjoy! —Smokey
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Old 02-06-2017, 03:26 PM   #3274
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Talking Latest of LEXI Installment is Live. (MILF Lexi's Daughter provides distraction...)

Lexi Ch. 05: Stepdaughter Fake Out
https://www.literotica.com/s/lexi-ch...ghter-fake-out

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"Why are you looking at me like that?" she inquired, though she knew exactly what I was thinking.

I switched on the lamp beside as Lexi moved closer and stood above me. She was not dressed for Newport Beach. She was dressed for husband shopping on Rodeo Drive.

Lexi was busting out of a long-sleeved, white top that cut high on her neck. It conformed to her body like a second skin. The ribbing drew one's eyes over her busty chest and down to where they converged into a white, leather skirt. Not a micro-miniskirt but, a miniskirt. The Gucci medallion that hung off her waist marked the sweet spot hidden below. Lexi's all white outfit was complemented by sexiest of matte leather thigh boots. The spike heel ended in platinum matching the Gucci belt around her waist...

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