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John988
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I wrote two stories in a duology a little while ago, and I got pretty significant differences in ratings: the first was rated 3.83 and the second 4.32. Ordinarily, I would assume that I just wrote the second story better than the first, but in this case, I don't see it. I'm hoping a couple of you guys and gals could take a look at the two and give me some insight as to what you think my be the reason for the disparity.
Saving Herself: https://www.literotica.com/s/saving-herself-1
Saving Herself Pt. 2: https://www.literotica.com/s/saving-herself-pt-02
As a heads up, these are non-con stories, so if that isn't your cup of tea, you might want to pass.
Thanks in advance!
Saving Herself: https://www.literotica.com/s/saving-herself-1
Saving Herself Pt. 2: https://www.literotica.com/s/saving-herself-pt-02
As a heads up, these are non-con stories, so if that isn't your cup of tea, you might want to pass.
Thanks in advance!