tempr1974
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Beta reader needed 1800 word FFF story
I have about 1800 words written so far in the first part of a 3 chapter story .
I am looking for general feedback on the subject matter and "plot" and whatever else you may want to comment on .
I’d like to write 3 short stories describing three threesomes I have had. Those all occurred in my younger days before I settled down.
The first story is half written (got to a good stopping point) about a FFF threesome.
I have about 1800 words written so far in the first part of a 3 chapter story .
I am looking for general feedback on the subject matter and "plot" and whatever else you may want to comment on .
I’d like to write 3 short stories describing three threesomes I have had. Those all occurred in my younger days before I settled down.
The first story is half written (got to a good stopping point) about a FFF threesome.
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