Looking for an Editor for a Sci Fi Story

TedStv

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Hello. I have a story that I posted prematurely. I have a re-write ready to edit. It is a light Sci-fi with some fetish elements. The original. ..which needed cleanup desperately, can be found here.
http://www.literotica.com/s/teds-condition-an-origin-story.
I am really looking forward to working with someone. I am looking for basic grammatical clean up and suggestions about character motivation and dialog.
The word count on the revision is 7000 words. I tried to bring in more perspective from the female leads, as well as clean up the many glaring errors. I am concerned with verb tense.
This is the first part of what I hope to be a long series, so the plot I plan on leaving as is.
Please PM me if interested.
Thank you for your consideration.
 
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