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Old 05-14-2016, 02:46 AM   #1
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Slow seduction stories

Hi all,

I just finished reading "The Woodworker's Wife" by Andyhm and it was an amazing story.

I was kept on the edge of my seat as the antagonist tried his best to seduce the unsuspecting wife.What made the story smoking hot was that all of it was written from the husband's POV and we get to experience his emotions as he tries to head off the seduction attempts and find clues as to whether his wife had actually committed adultery.

Adding to the tension was the fact that the wife was slowly being taken in by the antagonist's antics. The author able to convey the husband's increased desperation and i for one could empathize with the husband's need to keep his wife away from her seducer thus making the story all the more engrossing.

All in all, it was a story that i enjoyed tremendously and while i will not spoil the ending, i could have lived with the story going the full cheating route or the route in which love overcomes all.

So after all that, i am here to beg for recommendations of stories that has the wife/girlfriend slowly being seduced into cheating. A bonus if the stories has the husband's POV and has him slowly noticing clues about the wife's infidelity.
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Old 06-06-2016, 08:05 PM   #2
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Thumbs up woodworkers wife

Yea I absolutely loved this story and hope to see more like it.
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Old 06-06-2016, 08:18 PM   #3
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Some authors I liked alot are suewatcher in the interacial section " lamars game" was outstanding if you like angsty types.
Jaycuck alot of his stories but I'm still catching up on his .
Xleglover. I read just about all his stories that I could find. Love his style.
Britease has some good ones too
This just to get you started usually I just do the category then by letter search takes a few tries to get one you like but it's like striking gold when you do find one. Happy hunting!
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Old 07-22-2018, 07:59 AM   #4
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This is another good story

https://www.literotica.com/s/melanies-seduction-ch-04

But chapter 4 is awaiting moderator approval for more than a year now. Don't know what is going on.
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Old 07-22-2018, 08:29 AM   #5
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https://www.literotica.com/s/melanies-seduction-ch-04

But chapter 4 is awaiting moderator approval for more than a year now. Don't know what is going on.
Same answer as the other thread:

It's dead in the water.

It's been reported for some reason and the site editor has referred it back to the author with a rejection notice. It's up to the author to fix it and resubmit. If they haven't done so after a year, they're not likely to do anything now. So it's a non-story.
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Old 07-23-2018, 12:17 PM   #6
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you may like https://www.literotica.com/s/bridge-group-ch-01

its a story about a husband that pushes the envelope with his wife and their young friend.....

some of this author's also, they aren't as drawn out but focus on seduction
https://www.literotica.com/stories/m...ge=submissions
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Old 08-06-2018, 04:59 AM   #7
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I love slow seduction stories and I wrote some from the seducee's point of view.

I've been trying to write more for a while, but I struggle to finish them as the seduction part gets more and more drawn out when I write (I realized I find the actual seduction way hotter than the eventual success that is sex). Not sure if anyone would even read them at this point.
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