Old 05-22-2014, 11:46 PM   #26
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I was on top.
One hand planted on your sweaty chest
the other grinding my lust down
until it was gone, like dust.
I couldn't wait to fake it for you.
All I wanted was your cock;
and your soul,
but your love is nothing more than a fading handprint on my ass.
Oh it was never about love
it was about how you had the power
to take my breath away
to spill my seed for you
to revere you as some goddess of cock

and yet with out the surrender of release it is all
just a fuck, as forgotten as.....what was I talking about
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Old 05-24-2014, 01:56 PM   #27
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Old 05-24-2014, 03:16 PM   #28
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a look of stretched chewing gum
sweet meat on bone, a rack of ribs
fried eggs sunny side up, a downy peach
for someone with a famine victim figure
she looks like a mighty fine feast
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Old 05-24-2014, 04:29 PM   #29
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with cold milk kisses;
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Old 05-25-2014, 04:10 PM   #30
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Have you ever spent the time
to tease and please a woman
to truss her down
and indulge in her
the taste, to see her writhe
to test her limits with textures
on flesh

maybe trace a poem on her clit
With your tongue, something
to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs to be finished

A spank here or there
To partake of her wholly
as each orgasm slicks her
Walls ready for the moment
of your own entrance

So she may indulge in feeling you
fill her numb her from all
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control

for once take her mind from
her so she can be free


Hmmm not what I was expecting when I started.....
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Old 05-25-2014, 04:14 PM   #31
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maybe trace a poem on her clit
With your tongue, something
to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs to be finished
It better not be a haiku, then.
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Old 05-25-2014, 04:15 PM   #32
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It better not be a haiku, then.
Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation or do you mean trying to whisper something like that in her ear
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Old 05-25-2014, 04:17 PM   #33
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Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation or do you mean trying to whisper something like that in her ear
Well, I mean, it's a bit too short, right? So, perhaps a haiku booklet will do.
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Old 05-25-2014, 05:01 PM   #34
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It better not be a haiku, then.
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Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation or do you mean trying to whisper something like that in her ear
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Well, I mean, it's a bit too short, right? So, perhaps a haiku booklet will do.
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just don't be counting the syllables in your head

and

everyone's a critic


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p.s tods,a great poem, exceptional line
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Old 05-25-2014, 05:35 PM   #37
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just don't be counting the syllables in your head

and

everyone's a critic


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I normally count them on my fingers lol, but I'm sure if I stopped to ask for a critique mid business she wouldn't see the funny side of it
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Old 05-25-2014, 05:38 PM   #38
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I normally count them on my fingers lol, but I'm sure if I stopped to ask for a critique mid business she wouldn't see the funny side of it
*so larfing here*
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Old 05-26-2014, 11:57 PM   #39
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Have you ever spent the time
to tease and please a woman
to truss her down
and indulge in her
the taste, to see her writhe
to test her limits with textures
on flesh

maybe trace a poem on her clit
With your tongue, something
to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs to be finished

A spank here or there
To partake of her wholly
as each orgasm slicks her
Walls ready for the moment
of your own entrance

So she may indulge in feeling you
fill her numb her from all
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control

for once take her mind from
her so she can be free


Hmmm not what I was expecting when I started.....
Isn't amazing when a poem just sort of writes itself?
I can almost feel it forming as you wrote it.....awesome....
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Old 05-27-2014, 01:38 AM   #40
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Hmmm not what I was expecting when I started.....
Happens to me all the time. Twice today in fact. I submitted one of them, Riding Free. The other I'm still pondering.
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Old 05-27-2014, 04:04 PM   #42
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Old 05-27-2014, 04:05 PM   #43
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You want equality?

Take off your big girl panties
shove them in his mouth
and take command
of your assets.

Tease and tantalize
start with your mouth.
"Use your words!"
Follow up with moistened lips and tongue.

Suck up his desire
blow it back out in slow drafts.
Lead him to the gates
but bar his entrance.

Bind him to the portcullis
climb his body
mount his face.
Force him to feed.

Build his appetite,
take what you want
while you give him
what he craves.

Once you're sated and he's
starved,
hand feed him
your milk and honey.

Rebuild your own appetite
then claim your share
of the banquet
that is man.
It seems you decided to go ahead and write something after that comment on Tod's poem. Damn. I approve. We should definitely create that thread.
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You want equality?

Take off your big girl panties
shove them in his mouth
and take command
of your assets.

Tease and tantalize
start with your mouth.
"Use your words!"
Follow up with moistened lips and tongue.

Suck up his desire
blow it back out in slow drafts.
Lead him to the gates
but bar his entrance.

Bind him to the portcullis
climb his body
mount his face.
Force him to feed.

Build his appetite,
take what you want
while you give him
what he craves.

Once you're sated and he's
starved,
hand feed him
your milk and honey.

Rebuild your own appetite
then claim your share
of the banquet
that is man.


lovely piece
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Old 05-27-2014, 04:15 PM   #45
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Old 05-27-2014, 04:42 PM   #46
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It seems you decided to go ahead and write something after that comment on Tod's poem. Damn. I approve. We should definitely create that thread.
Well then... LOL dooo it!
I'm pretty sure Todski and HoneyAdored would have something to contribute.
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Old 05-28-2014, 03:03 AM   #47
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Well then... LOL dooo it!
I'm pretty sure Todski and HoneyAdored would have something to contribute.
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Old 05-28-2014, 09:52 AM   #48
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The way a stare stops you
emergency brakes flipped
stutter to a grinding halt

a smile curls at the corner of your lip
eyes , the way they won't look away
as if he sizes you up for a feast
you glance at the ground
flip hair from your forehead
to try gather a sense of self
but his eyes

the aura of self assurance
he raises his hand
in silent command
a demand of his masculine essence

though you are mentally screaming in protest
at this indignation
there is something
about his hand

the way he dares
his eyes stare
take it and let him pull
you head long into
a stained memory

that even now makes you blush
flushed and wonder how
with just a look
he was able to
fly through your defenses
and take you
to places you haven't been before
or since.
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Did someone call?
Yes! Please sir, I want some more...

I would really like to see what you'd write with the theme of equality in mind.
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