need an editer for first story

roxs12ems

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need an editor for first story

Hello all, I am just finishing the first draft of my first story, I should be done with it today. I need help with punctuation and past/present tense. It's around 6000 words and involves masturbation, group, BDSM. I am also open to any ideas about the story's concept or direction. PM me with any questions or ideas.

Thanks
 
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Well you spelled editor wrong in your title and it's spelled story's not stories in the context you used, and you forgot the apostrophe in it's, so that's my feedback so far :)
 
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