Editor needed for female domination/reluctance

Hi. I'm looking for an editor to help with grammar/punctuation, and would also welcome input on content. The story is about a middle aged guy fooled into going to a nudist resort for a work trip. It includes female domination (but no BDSM).

It's around 11K words.

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