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Newish writer in Gay Male

Its hard to tell how many are fans of Gay male in here, but if there are any I would love to have my stories critiqued a bit. A lot of users comment on the subject matter of the story, and I love that, but I would also like a commentary on my writing and editing style, so pretty-please review my stories!
http://www.literotica.com/s/poor-simon-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/shy-jared-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-bottom-tier
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-boy-from-the-sea-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-new-world
 
New stories

Hello everyone,

I'm just popping in to say hi. I just posted my first story submissions. This is pretty cool (and slightly nerve wracking!). I'm relatively new to the erotica genre and definitely to sharing my work with people. Hopefully I'll be able to learn from other readers and improve my craft.

Enjoy :)
 
Indian stories

hi.. i would like more Indian writers share their experiences and fantasies here..
 
indigogaia said:
Hello everyone,

I'm just popping in to say hi. I just posted my first story submissions. This is pretty cool (and slightly nerve wracking!). I'm relatively new to the erotica genre and definitely to sharing my work with people. Hopefully I'll be able to learn from other readers and improve my craft.

Enjoy :)
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Welcome to Lit. We all have had our start somewhere and were just as, if not more, nervous as you are feeling right now. Hint: Post a link to any submissions to help people find it easier. WE are a lazy bunch.
 
x-men kink series updated

Chapter 3 of "Just Crossed My Mind" is up. It's an ongoing, bdsm oriented series. Wolverine takes charge of Cyclops, who is in the middle of a rather nasty nervous breakdown. This chapter features some pretty heavy medical play, so proceed with caution. Feedback would be appreciated. :)
 
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Power and Pleaure Chapter 3

HI folks. Its been awhile between chapters, but Power and Pleasure Chpt. 3 is up and ready to read.

This is a science fiction romance centering on a Royal family governing a intergalactic confederation and how they love, support and please each other as their nation fights to survive. The focus is on romance and the sex takes place among people who love and care for one an other.

The story is opened ended and will continue if I get enough readership and feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/s/power-and-pleasure

Feedback is, of course, ardently encouraged.



Thanks for reading.
 
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ultimate experience

I have an idea for a story and i'd like you imput on possible scenes. Karen and Bill have been married for awhile and Karen is worried that their love life is getting a bit stale and repetitive. She decided to give her husband the ulitmate gift for his big 40 birthday, over a three day weekend she will do whatever he wants with no holds barred and no recriminations after.

I would love to hear from both ladies and men what they think should happen.

Suggestions so far are:
a three way with one of her girlfriends
a three way with her sister
he enters her in a amature stripping contest at a local bar
he takes her out to a local mall and photographs her flashing
having her strip and service him and his budddies at his weekly poker game

What else can you come up with? respond here or email me at domwoolf69@aol.com
 
If your tastes run that way, you might have her try anal or deep throating. Both are out of the typical ken for most women, but a percentage of them will do them with varying results. (FWIW, I find having a woman swallow me to the hilt is very nice, but it's not necessarily the be-all and end-all for a good blowjob. It's just one more nice thing that can happen when getting sucked off, but I've had dazzlingly good blowjobs that never got anywhere near that.)

Domwoolf said:
I have an idea for a story and i'd like you imput on possible scenes. Karen and Bill have been married for awhile and Karen is worried that their love life is getting a bit stale and repetitive. She decided to give her husband the ulitmate gift for his big 40 birthday, over a three day weekend she will do whatever he wants with no holds barred and no recriminations after.

I would love to hear from both ladies and men what they think should happen.

Suggestions so far are:
a three way with one of her girlfriends
a three way with her sister
he enters her in a amature stripping contest at a local bar
he takes her out to a local mall and photographs her flashing
having her strip and service him and his budddies at his weekly poker game

What else can you come up with? respond here or email me at domwoolf69@aol.com
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Katy Perry: Encore

Hi everyone,

This is my first time posting to the forum.

I just wanted to do a little advertising for my latest fic. It's called Katy Perry: Encore and it's a short story I wrote to showcase what my style is like, while at the same time experimenting with it a little by writing from a first-person perspective for the first time.

In it, Katy Perry arranges a VIP pass for a lucky guy to meet her beside the stage for some quick fun before performing her encore.

You can find it here;

http://www.literotica.com/s/katy-perry-encore

Voting and feedback is always appreciated. Thanks!
 
Commando weekend

Karen's wardrobe for the weekend will consist of front-buttoning blouses and shirts, knee-length skirts and hold-up stockings. No bras. No knickers. While they're out shopping, having lunch, visiting friends, Karen will:
flash her pussy and tits to Bill with little regard for whether others can see
talk to Bill about people around them - would he like to fuck the waitress? - would he like to watch Karen suck off the taxi driver?
talk to Bill in graphic terms about what they're going to do when they get home

Domwoolf said:
I have an idea for a story and i'd like you imput on possible scenes. Karen and Bill have been married for awhile and Karen is worried that their love life is getting a bit stale and repetitive. She decided to give her husband the ulitmate gift for his big 40 birthday, over a three day weekend she will do whatever he wants with no holds barred and no recriminations after.

I would love to hear from both ladies and men what they think should happen.

Suggestions so far are:
a three way with one of her girlfriends
a three way with her sister
he enters her in a amature stripping contest at a local bar
he takes her out to a local mall and photographs her flashing
having her strip and service him and his budddies at his weekly poker game

What else can you come up with? respond here or email me at domwoolf69@aol.com
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