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Old 03-13-2014, 01:19 PM   #2976
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New chapter for "Everyone Loves My Ass"

http://www.literotica.com/s/everyone-loves-my-ass-ch-08

It took four years before I could manage chapter seven, and this latest one 'only' took six months. Progress!
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Old 03-17-2014, 01:56 AM   #2977
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Dress Off 4: The Rescue of Tess

Hi all,

I just wanted to do a quick plug for the fourth story in my first series.
Dress Off 4 finishes off the story of Tess Trueheart's capture in Dress Off 3.

This is a story that is largely in the embarrassed-naked-female genre, although there are elements of hypnosis and forced orgasms.

http://www.literotica.com/s/dress-of...rescue-of-tess

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Old 03-19-2014, 10:29 AM   #2978
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3/19 Update

Hi there everybody. Hope you'll forgive me if I'm feeling just a little down today so far. It's only a little after 10:00 a.m. my time as I'm typing this, and from the way things've been going, it's already not exactly my day. So I'll make this update relatively brief (compared to my others).
So, my three most recent stories (including the new one that hasn't been published yet) have been the last three, in alphabetical order. My last four have all been published in successive Mondays, "Hooked" (http://www.literotica.com/s/hooked-9) first, on 2/17, which has easily become by far my most popular one thus far, that was a nice little surprise. "Nightmerrogation" (http://www.literotica.com/s/nightmerrogation) , after that, on 2/24...not QUITE as popular, "Time Warp" (http://www.literotica.com/s/once-upon-a-time-warp) , which popped up on 3/3, hasn't exactly picked up as much attention as I'd have liked, but oh well, it's not doing too bad. And one week after that on 3/10, "Semi-Fresh Meat" (http://www.literotica.com/s/semi-fresh-meat) , which has probably been my gutsiest torture-themed story so far, and nowhere near the highest-rated, but I've gotta say, has more views and faves than I thought.
Well, most recently, I've pretty eager about this, is a sequel to one of my more beloved ones—if I can phrase it that way—"Happy Endings." So if you liked that one, I think you'll like its sequel too, at least I hope so. Its sequel title is "Won't You Smile Awhile For Me." Should be published before too much longer, again, I hope.
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Old 03-20-2014, 09:17 PM   #2979
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P.s.

Okay, well, now that it's up, the most recent story I've posted—in case anyone's unaware or hasn't seen it—is a sequel to the story called "For Happy Endings It Takes Two." I thought it was worth mentioning here because it's entitled "Won't You Smile Awhile For Me," and that's the title under which it was published (the title doesn't have a "Happy Endings II" in front of it, as I originally planned), so, just a little edification for anybody who might not have gotten to read the original.
So if you haven't read either of them yet, I think if you read the first one (http://www.literotica.com/s/for-happ...s-it-takes-two) first, you'll like the second one (http://www.literotica.com/s/wont-you...-awhile-for-me) a little more. T'anks. Love, Smokey
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Old 03-26-2014, 08:58 AM   #2980
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Cassadee Pope visits Carrie Underwood's hotel room

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Old 03-26-2014, 05:44 PM   #2981
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http://www.literotica.com/s/frans-fu...ventures-ch-01

The continuation of my lukewarmly received Bored Fran series.

edit- Just noticed a red H next to it. Wooohooo. Don't mind me. I'm a newb here
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Old 03-26-2014, 10:23 PM   #2982
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Greetings, all! I see there's no Welcome section, so I guess I'll make this my official hello.

My first story for the site, "Extra Credit" was just approved just this afternoon. Category: Lesbian Sex, Tags: Spanking, D/s, Oral, and Consensual. If your tastes run in that direction, I would be gratified if you would have a look.

http://www.literotica.com/s/extra-credit-30

Other than that, It's great to be here!
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Old 03-28-2014, 03:47 PM   #2983
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I had high hopes that my latest story would be well-received, but so far, the response has been lukewarm. I feel that it has all the elements of a good story: a well-formed plot, an underdog hero, a villain, a little humor, plenty of action and sex, and even a little twist at the end. I would be interested in hearing from veteran readers and writers why you like or dislike this story.

"Cocksucking Competiton"
http://www.literotica.com/s/cocksuck...petition-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/cocksuck...petition-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/cocksuck...petition-ch-03

This story is my homage to both the "Rocky" franchise and a classic porn movie called "Stiff Competiton."
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Old 03-28-2014, 05:37 PM   #2984
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I had high hopes that my latest story would be well-received, but so far, the response has been lukewarm. I feel that it has all the elements of a good story: a well-formed plot, an underdog hero, a villain, a little humor, plenty of action and sex, and even a little twist at the end. I would be interested in hearing from veteran readers and writers why you like or dislike this story.

"Cocksucking Competiton"
http://www.literotica.com/s/cocksuck...petition-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/cocksuck...petition-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/cocksuck...petition-ch-03

This story is my homage to both the "Rocky" franchise and a classic porn movie called "Stiff Competiton."
I really enjoyed all three segments. The twist at the end was a cute addition to the story.
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anon-"This is the literary equivalent of burning down your house to get rid of flies."

anon-"Fantastic - had the opportunity to score a "1" on everyone of this pathetic authors renderings. As usual and expected this putrid submission sucks dog-piss as expected."

anon-"A plot twist .. that might have led to a better than average story is incompetently and lazily executed."

anon-"This was simply awful. Way too little information. There was nothing clever or entertaining in this entire mess. If zero was possible, I'd give it to you. I can't believe I wasted my time reading this drivel."

anon-"What is expected from this sorry excuse of an author. Author..go far, far away."
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Old 03-29-2014, 11:23 AM   #2985
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New story up for the Earth Day contest. Please check it out and vote.

http://www.literotica.com/s/remembrance-and-hope

Thanks everyone.



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anon-"This is the literary equivalent of burning down your house to get rid of flies."

anon-"Fantastic - had the opportunity to score a "1" on everyone of this pathetic authors renderings. As usual and expected this putrid submission sucks dog-piss as expected."

anon-"A plot twist .. that might have led to a better than average story is incompetently and lazily executed."

anon-"This was simply awful. Way too little information. There was nothing clever or entertaining in this entire mess. If zero was possible, I'd give it to you. I can't believe I wasted my time reading this drivel."

anon-"What is expected from this sorry excuse of an author. Author..go far, far away."
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Old 03-29-2014, 12:05 PM   #2986
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My Earth Day Entry is up

That's What Friend's Are For in the first time category

http://www.literotica.com/s/thats-wh...nds-are-for-13
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Old 04-10-2014, 04:32 PM   #2987
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So if you're looking to check out stories by some of Literotica's best authors (and me) be sure to check out the stories involved in the first ever Tag Team Championship.

These pairings were picked at random and all stories are submitted anonymously under the name Odd_couplings

Here is the link, be sure to check them out, vote and comment. Odd are some of your favorites are involved.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions
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Old 04-18-2014, 02:11 PM   #2988
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Update 4/18

So what's going down, genties and ladlemen? Smokey here, with the April update...pickup up where I left off, while "Happy Endings II" is continuing to kick some serious @$$, still pretty popular, the next couple aren't quite that far behind.

After that's my homage to hot Swedish girls (and their language), "Penalized Member" (http://www.literotica.com/s/penalized-member)...wish I could've come up with a better title for that. I thought about giving it a Swedish title, but thought that would have been too confusing. And I rather liked "Caught Red-Cocked," but thought that would give too much away.

And then Angie's back, again, right after that, "Hypnothe-Rapist IV" (http://www.literotica.com/s/hypnothe...r-scores-ch-04), which I knew wouldn't receive a ton of attention...sequels obviously don't get as many views as their originals (except of course in the case of "Happy Endings II," since no one KNEW that was a sequel! Hmm...maybe I'm on to something there... ), let alone threequels and fourquels and beyond. But I'd still like to know what you think of her, if she should stick around or if that's enough...

Not least but last, just published yesterday as of this update, "Step-Mommie Dearest" (http://www.literotica.com/s/step-mommie-dearest), which, eh...well, let's just say this much: if you liked "Hell And Back," you'll probably like "Step-Mommie Dearest." Or if you're a lesbian who's ever dealt with any crap about it, you'll probably like "Step-Mommie Dearest."

So what's next? Well, immediately next is an essay, actually, a miniature autobiography, not erotic, just...well, it should show up relatively soon. Not a sex story, just some soul-baring and a little venting to be found there. But after that, getting back to where I started, if you like Sara Kelton (and Melleny)—as many obviously do—I think you're going to be pleased in the near future. And beyond that, I have no idea!

Oh, yes, and as this is timely, in light of Easter, you might like to go find my story "Bad Rabbit" (http://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-break-a-bad-rabbit)...HOW did I forget the link to that in the February update? Anyway, it's good if you like BDSMs, and it's evil, but in a kinda cute way. Maybe I should've put "Easter" in the title, as a clue. Love, StB
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