Hi guys,
This is my second story on literotica. My first story recieved many points of improvement which I have tried to work upon. I plan to make more parts of this story. Would really like some honest feedback on how the story feels like as a first part and introduction to the series.
https://www.literotica.com/s/an-arduous-affair-pt-01
Please read and comment. Would really appreciate it.
Thanks!
This is my second story on literotica. My first story recieved many points of improvement which I have tried to work upon. I plan to make more parts of this story. Would really like some honest feedback on how the story feels like as a first part and introduction to the series.
https://www.literotica.com/s/an-arduous-affair-pt-01
Please read and comment. Would really appreciate it.
Thanks!