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Start date Jun 28, 2003

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DemiLover

Virgin

Nov 15, 2011

#2,576

Hi all Literotica authors. I have just had my first story published, and would really appreciate any feedback you have, good or bad, in the comments under my story. I hope you enjoy it - it's a simple and passionate love letter from one cyber-lover to another...
http://www.literotica.com/s/love-letter-to-a-cyber-lover

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fgrrtlover

Virgin

Nov 19, 2011

#2,577

I just finished and posted a story called "Treated Like An Object". It has a little bit of male exhibitionism and whereas it embraces female empowerment, its not so much "whips and chains" femdom. Please bring on the comments and critique!

http://www.literotica.com/s/treated-like-an-object

avrgblkgrl

Simply Delicious

Nov 20, 2011

#2,578

It is up and ready!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1182263&page=submissions

PennLady

Literotica Guru

Nov 25, 2011

#2,579

Second chapter is up.

http://www.literotica.com/s/rhythm-and-the-blue-line-ch-02

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TNP_

Virgin

Nov 29, 2011

#2,580

New story posted

In a little bit of good news-bad news, I have a new story posted. I was hoping I might get the second part of my Charmed story from last month completed, but no such luck. That's the bad news I guess. The good news is that I am actually working on it and have made a fair amount of progress. I may even be able to finish it in a few weeks. I hope so. I'd like to complete this thing before people forget all about it.

Meanwhile I've posted the first chapter in another long running series. This one features Jennifer Love Hewitt. Other lovelies will appear in later chapters. This series also counts as unfinished but not in the same sense as my Charmed story. I have 4 chapters in this series with another 2 or 3 to go I think. The difference between this series and my Charmed story is that I've never walked away from this one for years at a time. It just feels that way because I take such a long time to complete a chapter. So it goes.

Anyway, enough rambling on my part, here's the link to chapter 1 of "Love in an Elevator".

http://www.literotica.com/s/love-in-an-elevator-ch-01

Thanks for reading and as always comments and feedback of any kind are very much appreciated.

TNP

PennLady

Literotica Guru

Dec 1, 2011

#2,581

Third chapter is up.
http://www.literotica.com/s/rhythm-and-the-blue-line-ch-03

PennLady

Literotica Guru

Dec 1, 2011

#2,582

And my holiday contest story is up, too.

http://www.literotica.com/s/christmas-creep

Hope you enjoy.

SWFL_Wordslinger

Really Experienced

Dec 1, 2011

#2,583

Fifth chapter of "The Lingerie Incident" is up

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-lingerie-incident-ch-05

Enjoy! (Hopefully lol)

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Classica

Virgin

Dec 4, 2011

#2,584

Writhing in Ecstasy

Meet Solara, and see her lift off in a sexy new show!

The story begins slowly, leading up to the themes of submission, a toy fetish, and the start of some copious cocksucking...

"Writhing in Ecstasy"
http://www.literotica.com/s/writhing-in-ecstasy

(Hope you enjoy it.) :heart:

:heart:

:rose:

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Strangebuddy

Guest

Dec 6, 2011

#2,585

This story has actually been up for a week but I didn't know about this thread at the time (sorry, still a noob). It is my first one, so I'd really appreciate feedback.

The story will either be a stand-alone or the first of a series, depending on feedback to it.

It's in the mature section and has two characters who have a severe age gap between them (one is 18 and one is 68).

"Carl & Cassie"

http://www.literotica.com/s/carl-and-cassie

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ManhattanMinx

Virgin

Dec 8, 2011

#2,586

My first story went live on the site.

http://www.literotica.com/s/long-legs-in-a-black-mini-skirt

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TNP_

Virgin

Dec 15, 2011

#2,587

New story posted

Okay, this is a little sooner than I have normally put up a new story but as we are all aware the holiday season tends to eat up a lot of time. So, rather than not post anything this month, or post at a time when people are busy with other things, I chose to put up the 2nd chapter of "Love in an Elevator" now.

Here's the link -

http://www.literotica.com/s/love-in-an-elevator-ch-02-1

As always I'd love to know what you think of it, good or bad. Feedback, even in the form of a vote for the story, is always appreciated.

Until next month,

TNP

P.S. For anyone interested, I am making progress, albeit slowly, on the 2nd part of my Charmed story. Please bear with me. Thanks.

LordMhoram

Really Experienced

Dec 15, 2011

#2,588

My first non-human:

Jenna Ch. 01 "Nature Therapy".

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SweetSexySwitch

Experienced

Dec 15, 2011

#2,589

Something new by me

The newest. It's short and was just what was running through my head when I woke up. Thoughts are appriciated!

http://www.literotica.com/s/fuck-me-21

PennLady

Literotica Guru

Dec 16, 2011

#2,590

New Chapter

Next Chapter of Rhythm & the Blue Line is up. Enjoy!

http://www.literotica.com/s/rhythm-and-the-blue-line-ch-05

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sarhad

Virgin

Dec 23, 2011

#2,591

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-killer-1 - The killer

My 1st attempt. Its a conversation between a detective and a guy who helps him in solving murders. Would be great if i can receive some constructive feedback

ManInIronMask

a book by Alexander Dumas

Dec 27, 2011

#2,592

Lucy1970Harker said:
My new story, "Going Down," is posted. Love to get your feedback. Thanks.

Needs moderator approval - what is the story about? It is an interesting title

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EncryptedOne

Virgin

Dec 29, 2011

#2,593

New Story

First time to submit. This is a story about a young man that dies on his hospital bed and has an out of body experience as a horny spirit...

http://www.literotica.com/s/invisible-man-1

ive written chapter two but was working on fine tuning it

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roomfor1more

Really Really Experienced

Jan 5, 2012

#2,594

I have posted the first two chapters of a story that documents a journey a couple takes in trying to revive a past sexual practice in order to rekindle feelings that were once felt. The story is a somewhat of a departure for me and those of you who may have read my other stories this one is a bit different.

http://www.literotica.com/s/awakening-my-wifes-sexual-desire-ch-01 - Chapter 1

http://www.literotica.com/s/awakening-my-wifes-sexual-desire-ch-02 - Chapter 2

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LOAnnie2

Really Experienced

Jan 6, 2012

#2,595

So my first and probably only celebrity story has posted--definitely not as hardcore as most of my other works, be kind!

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-date-with-emily

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lovecrafter11

Virgin

Jan 7, 2012

#2,596

http://www.literotica.com/s/aunt-claudia-ch-02

Second chapter of my Aunt-Nephew story. There's a hot tub and the Mom get's involved. I love reading feedback so please read it and leave some if you're into this sort of story.

sr71plt

Literotica Guru

Jan 7, 2012

#2,597

. . . .

posted to wrong board.

PennLady

Literotica Guru

Jan 8, 2012

#2,598

Part 7 of Rhythm & the Blue Line is up.

http://www.literotica.com/s/rhythm-and-the-blue-line-ch-07

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TheBigLove126

Virgin

Jan 9, 2012

#2,599

http://www.literotica.com/s/aunt-alison-ch-01

Aunt Alison Ch. 01

After not seeing his aunt since he was a young boy, Chad finally meets Alison.

Comments & Feedback are welcome & encouraged

LordMhoram

Really Experienced

Jan 11, 2012

#2,600

Fashionable Fantasy

Fashionable Fantasy has been approved in the Loving Wives category.

Okay, I'm ready.

RELEASE THE TROLLS!

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