Title: Hungry Ones
Author: Loneeyes
Category: Erotic Couplings
Link: http://www.literotica.com/s/hungry-ones
This isn't just my first erotic story I've shown anyone, it's the first one I've ever written. I'd really love some feedback. I'm fine with criticism, although I'd appreciate the constructive variety!
Author: Loneeyes
Category: Erotic Couplings
Link: http://www.literotica.com/s/hungry-ones
This isn't just my first erotic story I've shown anyone, it's the first one I've ever written. I'd really love some feedback. I'm fine with criticism, although I'd appreciate the constructive variety!