Sister Sitting On My Lap (Rookie Writer)

Sister Sitting On My Lap

Jerking off and readying a climax when your sister stumbles in your room and jokingly sits on your lap unaware you are about to lose it.

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BruceKerger said:

Jerking off and readying a climax when your sister stumbles in your room and jokingly sits on your lap unaware you are about to lose it.

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Did you write it?