Mom/Son Incest Novella Feedback

I have written a few stories on here (all incest but I prefer mom/son). I was sick for three days and wrote what I hope is my best piece. I haven't edited it extensively yet as it is 35,000 words but it is a quick read. The very beginning is a little niche so I am hoping people can tell me if it adds or takes away from the rest of the story. I would be thankful if anyone would let me email it to them for review. If you like mom/son incest and/or slutty moms then you should like this (I hope!).

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I really only need to see how the first page reads. Like if it's palatable for a general audience. I don't need editing.

That's still where you ask for help on stories not yet posted at Literotica.

Providing the 'niche' isn't non consensual paste it into a private message and I'll read it and tell you what I think.

Mum /son

The incest / the thought of helping mum , her helping me. My Mum don't get much from my Dad, I started a story last but week , a little confused how to proceed .

paulaPH said:

The incest / the thought of helping mum , her helping me. My Mum don't get much from my Dad, I started a story last but week , a little confused how to proceed .

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I'm guessing you need the "authors hangout" forum Paula if it's an idea you've got for a story. Or even "story ideas", although I was told that is more for readers requests.

Sounds like an excellent story.

thankyou , I will find my way in time , but most things are a state of Mind .