CiaoSteve
Lonely Dreamer
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- Mar 31, 2015
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Hi
Just published a new story and received positive comments but also suggesting the story is rough around the edges. Wondered if anyone had the time to take a read and provide some observations on how to improve the writing style as I do intend there to be several more chapters.
It is in the science fiction category and contains mild lesbian sex.
https://www.literotica.com/s/deep-space-destiny-ch-01
Looking forward to yours comments.
Steve
Just published a new story and received positive comments but also suggesting the story is rough around the edges. Wondered if anyone had the time to take a read and provide some observations on how to improve the writing style as I do intend there to be several more chapters.
It is in the science fiction category and contains mild lesbian sex.
https://www.literotica.com/s/deep-space-destiny-ch-01
Looking forward to yours comments.
Steve