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Old 04-18-2017, 08:33 AM   #1
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Cheerleader Car Wash

Spring has sprung and bake sales give way to wet and wonderful fundraisers.

After all, Tshirts, booty shorts, hoses, suds...what could go wrong?

Let's see:

~ the two freshmen* candidates making out in the back corner?
~ the wind blowing the top off on of the gals waving signs along the roadway?
~ the customer who offers Sally a big tip if she'll wet HIS big tip?
~ the female customer who makes a similar offer to Alice?
~ the couple whop proposition the two who were making out?
~ the coach who can't resist?
~ the dried up prune of a female principal who tries to get matters under control- until she too loses control?
~ the Tentacle Monster oozes up from the drain to see what is sudsing?

*which must make them college girls.
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Old 04-20-2017, 02:57 AM   #2
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With a title like "Cheerleader Car Wash," it almost HAS to end up being a lesbian orgy.

But I suppose I can also see a lot of erotic coupling if the football team shows up to help out......

Remember that movie, "Wild Things"? I believe it had a car wash scene early on, with Denise Richards and Neve Campbell. Oh my.... I'll be in my bunk.....
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Old 04-20-2017, 03:55 AM   #3
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I'd like to see a father who realizes what a hottie her daughter has become when he sees her bent over washing the cars.
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lol I lost it at "Tentacle Monster"
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I'd like to see a father who realizes what a hottie her daughter has become when he sees her bent over washing the cars.
maybe it's his car & she is mashing her wet soapy chest against the windshield as he sits inside?
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Old 04-20-2017, 09:31 AM   #6
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maybe it's his car & she is mashing her wet soapy chest against the windshield as he sits inside?
Just watched Cool Hand Luke, eh?
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Old 04-20-2017, 12:05 PM   #7
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Just watched Cool Hand Luke, eh?
That's exactly what I thought of, too! GMTA!
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Old 04-21-2017, 04:00 AM   #8
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Male cheerleaders

There are some neat gay car wash videos for inspiration. Or the ladies can always show up for a car wash and the full service from the cheerleading guys.
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Old 04-21-2017, 08:15 AM   #9
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Remember that movie, "Wild Things"? I believe it had a car wash scene early on, with Denise Richards and Neve Campbell. Oh my.... I'll be in my bunk.....
Indeed... a great scene.

But if you want something readily available on Youtube just google "Lost Girl car wash scene". That show was an overlooked gem for sensuality....
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Just watched Cool Hand Luke, eh?
not in decades.
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I dunno, real life cheerleader carwashes always seem so normal, I don't know what goes on behind the scenes though.
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Old 04-21-2017, 02:01 PM   #12
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I dunno, real life cheerleader carwashes always seem so normal, I don't know what goes on behind the scenes though.
It's the fantasy element. I mean honestly what red blooded heterosexual male doesn't have at least 1 or 2 cheerleader fantasies in his life? Anyone who doesn't claim to have one id argue is lying. I mean seriously have you ever seen the average cheerleading outfits between high school and the national competition level? I mean its all to sell sex...

Though i will have to give kudos to the tentacle monster and cheerleader idea because its easy to picture 3-4 cheerleaders held up in the air by each limb and then having more tentacles strategically rip their uniform in places along with their panties. Then for the finale to have all 3 of their holes violated simotaneously by more tentacles.
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It's the fantasy element. I mean honestly what red blooded heterosexual male doesn't have at least 1 or 2 cheerleader fantasies in his life? Anyone who doesn't claim to have one id argue is lying. I mean seriously have you ever seen the average cheerleading outfits between high school and the national competition level? I mean its all to sell sex...

Though i will have to give kudos to the tentacle monster and cheerleader idea because its easy to picture 3-4 cheerleaders held up in the air by each limb and then having more tentacles strategically rip their uniform in places along with their panties. Then for the finale to have all 3 of their holes violated simotaneously by more tentacles.
Agreed, what red blooded hetero male etc. But rather than tentacles I picture each cheerleader being held up by 3 or 4 red blooded hetero males who rip their uniforms and their panties and then fuck all 3 holes simultaneously. Gangfucking a cheerleader on a car hood is my fantasy.
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~ the wind blowing the top off on of the gals waving signs along the roadway?
No, since the tops have to be skin tight.

Those tiny pleated skirts though .....


Lots of Hard R and soft porn flicks on this theme though.
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maybe it's his car & she is mashing her wet soapy chest against the windshield as he sits inside?


That could work. Or her brother. Or her Mother.

Or her 'good/prude' identical twin sister's boyfriend.
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Hmmm, suppose the BF doesn't know there's a twin sister? Hasn't been with the GF long enough to meet the family or whatever. Thinks the slutty cheerleader is his prude GF and tries to take her. She lets him. It's only afterwards that he finds out. 'Oh I'm not Angel. I'm her slutty twin sister Desire'. Did you think you were fucking my sister?'
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With a search or two to find out what their ages were at the time, it turns out I can use the comparison of the Daniel twins, Brittany and Cynthia since they were 18 at the time they got my attention.
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Having experience in doing fundraising car washes I will say that school related ones are "tame" as much as you may wish to spice things up. After all your schools imagine has to be taken into account. So your choice of bikini can't be to wild and your public behavior on par with it. Now that's not to we didn't get silly and have fun, but still "tame". Now events put on by private or commercial organizations, clubs, restaurants, etc can be a lot more fun and active. Especially if the place revolves around hot girls in skimpy clothes. In those cases your restricted by what you can get away with in public. In this case most of us would be pushing the boundaries as much as we could.

Now going to the fantasy side of it, all the things mentioned above would make for an even funnier event. And of course the arrival of the tentacle monster would cap the day.
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Yeah, the TittyBar ones are better.
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The club I work at usually has half a dozen or so over the summer. Since it's on private land we can get away with a fair amount. It's still public so no nudity. But usually thong bikinis. And we're pretty playful with each other. Touching and kissing. It certainly could open lots possibilities for RP's or stories.
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Well, ideally they should be out of the public eye, on a private estate somewhere. Club customers or similar. Then you do the cheerleader bit and forget the panties under the skirts to let the pussies come up for air.

$50/car for the wash and peak alone. Tips optional for whatever else comes to mind.
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Old 04-28-2017, 08:52 AM   #22
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Don't know if Nikki_2021 saw this thread, but this story runs with basically this idea:

https://www.literotica.com/s/bikini-carwash
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Spring has sprung and bake sales give way to wet and wonderful fundraisers.

After all, Tshirts, booty shorts, hoses, suds...what could go wrong?

Let's see:

~ the two freshmen* candidates making out in the back corner?
~ the wind blowing the top off on of the gals waving signs along the roadway?
~ the customer who offers Sally a big tip if she'll wet HIS big tip?
~ the female customer who makes a similar offer to Alice?
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~ the coach who can't resist?
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*which must make them college girls.
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With a title like "Cheerleader Car Wash," it almost HAS to end up being a lesbian orgy.

But I suppose I can also see a lot of erotic coupling if the football team shows up to help out......

Remember that movie, "Wild Things"? I believe it had a car wash scene early on, with Denise Richards and Neve Campbell. Oh my.... I'll be in my bunk.....
I like the lesbian concept..
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what if it starts raining during the car wash and the gals all end up with wet T-shirts before they can run for shelter? And what happens when they do find shelter?
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