Editor needed for 3000 word story

I have a story that is just under 3000 words. I submitted it already, but edited it taking some suggestions from user comments. The story is about a twenty-one year old college girl losing her virginity. Please let me know if you would be willing to help make this story better.

Thank you,

Dan

Shoot me a Word copy and I'll take a look. I am busy. I will give you a quick and dirty and let you know what I think, as I can. email personal info prohibited per forum guidelines