Originally Posted by sydneyguy8
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Sheís inside her glasses? He dragged her in to a nearby empty storage room? How does he know thereís a store room? How does he know the storage room is empty? Presumably heís got xray vision? The cleaner stumbles into reception and sees them. Reception has moved into the storage room? Are we in City Apartments because when the tourist arrives we are apparently in a store? Where is the non consent? He doesnít appear to force them to suck his cock they seem to be quite enthusiastic about it.
The things Iíve mentioned are stupid elementary mistakes. You should read through what youíve written before submitting it.
Why would a reader email you? Anyone who wants to comment does it in this thread. Presumably thatís why you started it. Iíd rewrite it and submit an edit.