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Old 04-14-2018, 05:37 PM   #1
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Mind control beta reader/editor

Anyone want to take a look at a 7k word hypnosis story? PM me.
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Old 04-19-2018, 06:19 PM   #2
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I would be happy to look at content and story flow. If you are looking for grammar or spelling checks, then I'm not the reader/ editor for you. If you want, check out some of my stories to see if our writing style is comparable.
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Old 04-20-2018, 10:35 AM   #3
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I would be happy to look at content and story flow. If you are looking for grammar or spelling checks, then I'm not the reader/ editor for you. If you want, check out some of my stories to see if our writing style is comparable.
i appreciate your kind offer but i have already submitted it. look for it to post soon titled 'beach house'!
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