Septimus_Eleutherios
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- Jan 1, 2016
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This is my first story written for literotica and I would appreciate any feedback on the story as well as my writing. I know that with practice I can get better as a storyteller. It's posted in the novels and novellas section.
It starts out as a first time experience but has the potential to be much more. The main character is in the late 1990'summer recounting his experiences from some time in the future. The main character is a 21 year old male Virgin who is using the Internet of the day to hunt for sex in his real life. He's had experience playing role playing games and responds to an advertisement seeking adult role players.
The first role he plays is that off a Gladiator, trained not in killing but in erotic submission and the giving of pleasure.
I have some ideas on where I could take the story from here but am really hoping to get some suggestions on where I might take the story and what boundaries I should set to my story to help it appeal to a wide audience.
Thanks,
Septimus_Elutherios
It starts out as a first time experience but has the potential to be much more. The main character is in the late 1990'summer recounting his experiences from some time in the future. The main character is a 21 year old male Virgin who is using the Internet of the day to hunt for sex in his real life. He's had experience playing role playing games and responds to an advertisement seeking adult role players.
The first role he plays is that off a Gladiator, trained not in killing but in erotic submission and the giving of pleasure.
I have some ideas on where I could take the story from here but am really hoping to get some suggestions on where I might take the story and what boundaries I should set to my story to help it appeal to a wide audience.
Thanks,
Septimus_Elutherios