Originally Posted by Gamina
After a long hiatus I decided to get back into writing, and my first project is a rewrite of a previously published story about a monther modling for her son. I am taking reader feedback to change the ending of it. (more romantic than the first one)
But with English not being my native language I really could use a fresh pair of eyes on it. For both grammar as general build up feedback.
Thanks in advance!
I focus on erotica, and not extensive character development. May I ask, are you intending to write erotica, or mere titillating prose? I'm cool with the genre. Congrats on your new avatar. john
30s, single, midwest, 5'10", 180lbs