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Old 02-14-2019, 08:03 PM   #1
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Looking for editor (mother son romance)

Hey all,

After a long hiatus I decided to get back into writing, and my first project is a rewrite of a previously published story about a monther modling for her son. I am taking reader feedback to change the ending of it. (more romantic than the first one)

But with English not being my native language I really could use a fresh pair of eyes on it. For both grammar as general build up feedback.

Thanks in advance!
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Old 02-14-2019, 08:17 PM   #2
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Hey all,

After a long hiatus I decided to get back into writing, and my first project is a rewrite of a previously published story about a monther modling for her son. I am taking reader feedback to change the ending of it. (more romantic than the first one)

But with English not being my native language I really could use a fresh pair of eyes on it. For both grammar as general build up feedback.

Thanks in advance!

I focus on erotica, and not extensive character development. May I ask, are you intending to write erotica, or mere titillating prose? I'm cool with the genre. Congrats on your new avatar. john
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Old 02-15-2019, 03:02 AM   #3
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Its a mix of both, there is a substancial buildup to the climax.

(This has been my avatar for years now, so I think you are confusing me with someone else)
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Old 02-15-2019, 06:45 PM   #4
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How long is it? When do you need it by?
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Old 02-16-2019, 05:53 AM   #5
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It's @ around 5000 words atm (just missing the last scene, plan is to have it done tonight or tomorrow depending how well my five month old sleeps)

No deadline, I am more of the its done when it is done well kind of woman
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Old 02-16-2019, 05:59 PM   #6
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I just sent you a message about editing.
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