Editorial Help Needed

Anteroson

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Hey Roommates! Legal professional and aspiring writer here. Wrote my first fictional story about mature interracial love and submitted. It was promptly rejected "Please break up your dialogue. The convention is one speaker per paragraph, so whenever someone new says something, start a new a paragraph."

Any female editors interested giving it a read for grammar and structure? Any help appreciated.

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