My latest story, editors & readers wanted!!!

I don't really have a name for this story yet, but I would love to have any editing or feedback anyone is willing to give. It's a bout a man, his longtime sexual plaything, and her daughter. It will likely need to be in the taboo category if I ever post it.

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and feel free to write in any edits you think it needs, it will save them as comments.