UnkownGhost
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So this is an idea for a short story. Like a Thousand or so words, nothing too long and complicated. Just simple and fun.
A person who reads stories about cheating wives and cuckolding overhears his wife talking about having Manage e Trois with her best friend Derek and his Mother.
The husband can't believe that his wife would do such a thing. yadda yadda yadda. Sure the fantasy of watching her fuck and be pleasured is just a fantasy something that makes him sick to his stomach should she actually do it.
Basically bad communication is the culprit of this story.
So the character prepares for the worst. He knows that once this happens there is no going back. Some of his friends applaud him for standing up for himself, others condemn him. He should allow his wife to do this.
Not a fan of confrontations (direct confrontations) he decides to pack up his stuff and leave the house. Set up a place to where he can think clearly.
EDIT: A great idea from FantasyXY!
Instead of doing something drastic. Just write about what is going through the character's mind.
His wife doesn't understand why he's freaking out. He doesn't understand why she's so casual about her plans. She says she would've invited but he would be the odd person out. After all he doesn't drink wine. He hates wine. But Derek and his mother love wine and are willing to try a new brand.
EDIT: A great idea from John Blackhawk
To be cruel there should be a wine tasting. The character can't see what is going on but can hear multiple sexually explicit terms.
Folks I wish I could write well enough myself. I like their suggestions because that way all of sex can play out in the characters mind. All of the drama takes place in his mind. But then due to lack of communication you have tension between he and his wife.
I'd really like to see this happen. Like I said a short story. Funny, some sex, happy ending.
Might even put down a couple of bucks for it. Short story, not a freaking 37 chapter thing you know.
Thank you for taking the time to read this. I look forward to know your thoughts.
All of these drink names got me thinking about this you know. Buttery nipples, sex on the beach, etc etc.
A person who reads stories about cheating wives and cuckolding overhears his wife talking about having Manage e Trois with her best friend Derek and his Mother.
The husband can't believe that his wife would do such a thing. yadda yadda yadda. Sure the fantasy of watching her fuck and be pleasured is just a fantasy something that makes him sick to his stomach should she actually do it.
Basically bad communication is the culprit of this story.
So the character prepares for the worst. He knows that once this happens there is no going back. Some of his friends applaud him for standing up for himself, others condemn him. He should allow his wife to do this.
Not a fan of confrontations (direct confrontations) he decides to pack up his stuff and leave the house. Set up a place to where he can think clearly.
EDIT: A great idea from FantasyXY!
Instead of doing something drastic. Just write about what is going through the character's mind.
His wife doesn't understand why he's freaking out. He doesn't understand why she's so casual about her plans. She says she would've invited but he would be the odd person out. After all he doesn't drink wine. He hates wine. But Derek and his mother love wine and are willing to try a new brand.
EDIT: A great idea from John Blackhawk
To be cruel there should be a wine tasting. The character can't see what is going on but can hear multiple sexually explicit terms.
Folks I wish I could write well enough myself. I like their suggestions because that way all of sex can play out in the characters mind. All of the drama takes place in his mind. But then due to lack of communication you have tension between he and his wife.
I'd really like to see this happen. Like I said a short story. Funny, some sex, happy ending.
Might even put down a couple of bucks for it. Short story, not a freaking 37 chapter thing you know.
Thank you for taking the time to read this. I look forward to know your thoughts.
All of these drink names got me thinking about this you know. Buttery nipples, sex on the beach, etc etc.
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