Siblings Estranged beta-reader

Hi!

I'd really appreciate it if you would be willing to take a look at chapter two of Siblings Estranged and offer some general feedback.

It doesn't have to be anything overly detailed. Broad thoughts and impressions would be fine.

Here's a link to chapter one if you want to see if you'd be interested or not:

https://www.literotica.com/s/siblings-estranged-ch-01

Thanks!