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Newfound Lake

https://www.literotica.com/s/newfound-lake
Newfound Lake is my first self-contained short story (though it’s a little longer) I wrote for the Summer Lovin’ contest but was unable to finish in time. There’s quite a bit of sex going on and while I enjoy buildup, sex is added throughout. My writing has come far from my first submission and I love constructive criticism so I can make future works better. Also, I’m hoping for some contest feedback. Could it have placed?
Evan & Jane have known each other since first grade. Neither have a great opinion of the other until Jane becomes desperate for a summer job. Evan helps her out, they become friends on the lake and eventually it turns into much more.

The Dark Chronicles

The Dark Chronicles is my version of one of the world's great myth cycles. I play fast and loose with the more established versions of the myth (of which there are many) by introducing new characters, changing names, changing events, and generally writing it my way.

I am publishing it in the Sci-Fi and Fantasy category because of its over-arching mythical theme. It is mostly heterosexual in flavour, but has incest, a bit of gay male, some anal and various fetishes. There is no non-con and nothing extreme, other than blood in several scenes.

For those that know my work, the prologue (the first link below) is a promise, for those that don't know me, it's a tease.

The Chronicles are presented as a complete work, made up of a Prologue, ten chapters, and an Epilogue. The myth cycle itself is more extensive, this is the core story. Additional self-contained parts might happen in future, but no promises on that.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-00

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-01

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-02

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-03

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-04

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-05

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-06

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-07

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-08

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-09

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-10

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-dark-chronicles-ch-11

Reign of The Demon-Queen
https://www.literotica.com/s/reign-of-the-demon-queen-pt-01

Demon Queen Lilith is freed from her prison in the Abyss and out for revenge against her former lover lover and Sister-wife Naamah. The queen succubus is free and aims to build a new kingdom of lust on Earth and wage war in Hell.

Check it and please give some feedback. Thanks for your time.

Dream-Stone

A little erotic horror for the Halloween Competition. An ancient artefact, a young woman, a Mayan chief and some very realistic dreams all rolled up into a couple of @Lit pages. She becomes possessed by her nightmares (literally) but what do they want with her?

Hope you enjoy

https://www.literotica.com/s/dream-stone

Role playing game about prostitution

https://www.literotica.com/s/role-playing-with-michelle-ch-04

A young woman plays at being a streetwalker and her boyfriend pretends to be a customer. The game happens on location in 1970s New York City.

Purple Infinity is an inter-dimensional pornographic television series starring trans porn starlet Ana Douglass on her sexual romps through time and space!

In the pre-pilot episode, Ana Douglass is cast by Essi, a producer on the Purple Infinity with a kinky crush on our heroine, and she uses every tactic to get Ana to agree to the show: https://www.literotica.com/s/casting-purple-infinity

In the pilot episode dubbed "Every Girl Needs a Robot" Ana is sent to pick up her personal assistant robot, Uma, only to learn her new robot put the ASS in assistant, literally: https://www.literotica.com/s/casting-purple-infinity

Solace in Emma's Room

He is in the middle of a painful divorce. She, younger, is struggling with ambiguous sexual feelings and a disappointing first experience. They are siblings who have known each other since her birth. This story is about what happens when they are drawn together during his family visit.

https://www.literotica.com/s/solace-in-emmas-room

The Floating World - Madelyn

Another in my Floating World series featuring Adam Cain. This one features Madelyn, a woman who knows exactly what she wants and is determined to get him, and a younger woman, Juliette, who is just as confident.

A second part is currently being written, and possibly a third.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-floating-world-pt-06-madelyn


Madelyn, beside him, eased her legs further apart and slid her long fingers around the slide of her sex, to scent herself. She put those fingers to Adam's lips so he knew her arousal was there, and she fucked her fingers into his mouth for moisture, and his suck. She returned her fingers to her cunt and slowly started to slide, again. She kept watching Juliette, her eyes heavy lidded, her arousal thick and heavy.

Juliette was air and lightness, her slender, slight body standing over Adam, the nipples on her high breasts hard and tight. A delicate blaze of freckles scattered down over the top curves of her breasts, where she'd caught the sun in a bikini perhaps, or an open-necked shirt.

Adam licked his lips, his mouth dry. He gazed at Juliette's high breasts, and she saw the stillness in his eyes deepen, not so still any more, not so certain.

Juliette was certain. "My underwear. You may take them off, but..." and she cautioned him with her finger, again, "... you mustn't touch longer than necessary."

"But - "

"No sound," she insisted, and lifted her foot in warning.

Hello!

Chapter 5 of my ongoing "Vicki Loves" story has been posted! 21k words of daughter on daughter on mother action, with a heavy dose of futanari delightfulness mixed in. If you like dickgirls, if you like lots of kissing, if you like lots and lots of fluids spraying everywhere, well, give this nonsense a shot! Thanks to all who have been keeping up with Vicki's adventures already, of course, and I hope you enjoy this latest sticky installment!

https://www.literotica.com/s/vicki-loves-ch-05-cassie

(this chapter continues directly from the end of Chapter 4, so if you're diving right into Ch.5, it'll be pretty confusing, I reckon! )

(always happy to be PM'd or emailed about anything, too!)

The Wanderers

Stumbled here, so I'll throw in my most recent adventure. I created this story as a birthday gift for a dear friend who grew up loving westerns and all they comprised. Meshing it with my typical flair, it turned into a post-apocalyptic sci-fi western.

Give it a read, a vote and a comment if you feel up to it.

The Wanderers

My first story: Jack & Ronnie's Conference Trip (Part 1)

My first story has been published, and I'd appreciate any constructive criticism.

Jack & Ronnie's Conference Trip

Part 2 will be in the works soon. I hope you enjoy, please leave feedback if you're so inclined.

Thanks!
-JJ

Looking for feedback on my first story

Hello all,
I would love to have feedback on my first story that I have written. It is a true fantasy with a co-worker and I. I am planning on writhing many more and would love to know what you liked, and what I can improve on. You can leave feedback on the story or here on the board whichever is easiest. See the link below for the story. Thank you for taking the time to read it. Happy Holidays all.

https://www.literotica.com/s/beautiful-stranger-8

Pure lust stories building on the lives of 3 women - from a womans' POV

Hello All

I've loved reading erotica over the years, but have noticed that all of them are from a males' perspective. Most stories, respectfully, don't depict how a woman truly feels during moments of deep intimacy. I am making that attempt with my stories here. I have published 10 chapters so far, which have received mixed response. Help me improve.

I am pasting the link to Chapter 1, and hopefully, you'll progress till Chapter 10. Feedback and comments is what I am looking for to ensure my hidden fantasies match yours.

https://www.literotica.com/s/yours-lustfully-ch-01

Lots of love!

Just continuing my titfight fetish. Here's Chapter 5 in my "Smother" series featuring Brett and Angela.

Smothered & Covered

Counting Pennies

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Newest chapter of my vampire incest series is now live. Enjoy!

https://www.literotica.com/s/blood-passion-ch-02

Yours Lustfully - new story

Hello folks,

HNY! I've published a new story in the Yours Lustfully series.

https://www.literotica.com/s/yours-lustfully-aunt-ritas-new-year-treat

Couple of quick questions for those of you who've been reading this series:

1. Why do some characters get more viewership than the others? In this case, Aunt Rita is way more popular that Steffi or Maya.
2. What will enhance the quality of this erotica?

I am seeking your views and feedback.

Something for Everyone

Literotica writers often set themselves the challenge of writing something in every category. Since it's that time of year to set goals then fail spectacularly at meeting them, this is my one-shot at doing just that.

https://www.literotica.com/s/something-for-everyone-1

The Floating World - Juliette

The story with Adam and Madelyn continues. This chapter concentrates on Juliette.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-floating-world-pt-07-juliette

The girl was naked now, kneeling on the thin mattress. Roshi was beside her, dressed in a simple black tunic, a long length of rope in his hand. Juliette was facing away from the viewing window, so Maddy could see the cello curve of her back and buttocks, her flesh lightly dimpled under her skin.

Roshi had already tied Juliette's hands behind her back with an elegant knot, and was looping the rope around the girl's torso. He'd completed a four strand bind around her upper back and breasts, and was slowly circling another band at her waist. His hands were slow caution on the girl's skin, making sure the ropes were properly layered and looped.

Roshi helped Juliette stand, her legs slightly apart, and he passed the ropes between her legs and around one thigh.

"It's beautiful work, but she's not restrained," said Adam. "She could wear the ropes under a pretty dress, and no-one would know. She can ease her hands free. She can walk."

"She would know," said Madelyn, turning to Adam. "What would you do?" she asked, watching Adam's face for the things he wouldn't say.

"Bind her helpless, if that's what she wants," Adam replied. "Give her release, if she wants it. Frustrate her, if she wants that. Torment her, even."

"Would you fuck her?"

"If she wanted fucking."

"And if she didn't?" Maddy prompted.

The Floating World - Adam

The story continues, this chapter focussing on Madelyn and Adam.

A "word bubble" for the story can be seen here:

https://worditout.com/word-cloud/3576879


"Madelyn, this house really is very beautiful. Show it to me." He looked at her directly. "Show me where you live."

"Take your shoes off here. Bare feet on timber floors and carpets, feels lovely. Keeps me grounded." She bent from the waist to slip her heels off, and her jeans stretched taut over her ass, for his eyes.

"It's those angel's wings, Maddy. You shouldn't flutter so much." Adam leaned against a wall for balance, and crooked a leg to get at his laces, pulling them loose and slipping the shoe off his foot. He repeated the action, and put his shoes and socks under a small rack by the door. He looked up to see her smiling down at him.

"Kiss me here, by the door. A kiss for each room, don't you think?" Maddy stepped forward and undid two buttons on his shirt, and placed her hand behind his neck. She waited. Adam did the same, flicking two buttons from under her throat. The dance that started in the club continued.

"Is it a big house, Madelyn?" he asked.

"Come with me and find out." She pulled him to her.


https://www.literotica.com/s/the-floating-world-pt-08-adam

I am a new writer. I have written four stories. I am not sure if I should post a link to each or if posting a link to my profile is adequate.
I would like feedback that will help me become a better writer. Even if the reader doesn’t like the storyline.
Thank you for your time.


https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4743540&page=submissions

First Story I've Written

Howdy, I currently have 3 pieces published here and I'm stuck in the Valentines Day Contest backlog for the release of number 4 but the one I'm interested in feedback on is the very first piece of erotic fiction I produced for a dancer friend of mine about 10 years ago.

Since it's my first, I feel that its a bit rougher around the edges than many of my more recent ones, even though I've revised it several times over the years.

The title of the piece is Date Night and it's in Erotic Couplings. (link below)

https://www.literotica.com/s/date-night-109

This piece is emblematic of my style and while I believe that it is a little underwhelming considering the truly epic work I have been reading here thus far, I will try to put on a brave face and take your generous feedback in the spirit with which it is intended.

Thanks in advance.

electricblue66 said:

The story continues, this chapter focussing on Madelyn and Adam.

A "word bubble" for the story can be seen here:

https://worditout.com/word-cloud/3576879

Click to expand...

The word bubble is a terrific idea. I just did several of my stories and it was surprising what popped out as a result. The results are very insightful. So thanks for that lead.

electricblue66 said:

Come with me and find out." She pulled him to her.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-floating-world-pt-08-adam

Click to expand...

As to the snippets you posted I thought that what you've written was delightful. I liked the playfulness very much and in answer to your protagonists call to action, I will be heading over to read it post haste.

The Floating World - Juliette Redux

The fourth part of the story with Madelyn, Adam and Juliette. The focus of this chapter shifts to Madelyn and Juliette.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-floating-world-pt-09-juliette

Word cloud:https://worditout.com/word-cloud/3608755


After a while she opened her eyes and looked outside, and saw they were moving under an avenue of trees, with purple blossom catching the high sunlight. "We're going to Madelyn's house," she said, recognising the street.

"Yes, nearly there." Adam caught her eyes, and smiled. He reached for the remote to Madelyn's gate, and the big car crunched down the gravel drive, the gates closing silently behind them. Adam parked behind Maddy's car, and got out. He opened the rear door for Juliette, and she swung her legs out of the car. She presented an imperious hand which Adam took, assisting her to stand. He looked down at her, amused by her airs. She grinned back, impertinent, enjoying his attention.

She pressed herself against him, tilting her head up for a kiss. "Hello, Adam."

"Hello, my love," he replied.

"Am I?" she asked. "Your love?"

Adam laughed. "One of them."

"Tease," she replied, affectionately punching his arm. "I thought I was the only one." Juliette pouted and looked adorable, peeking up at him from under her fringe. "Have you told her, this other hussy who's got your heart?"

"Careful, she might hear you." Adam said, turning towards the house.

"Oh, you two! Stop this outrageous flirting." Madelyn looked down on the pair from the porch, where she had opened the front door to greet them. She stood tall and magnificent in a pair of stiletto heeled red velvet boots, thigh high, revealed by a long slit dress pulled tight at the waist with a wide belt.

I Met a Man, by Shabbu (coauthored by sr71plt/keithd/habu and Sabb)

BLURB:

When the young, blond, American author, and the dark-haired young Turkish-Cypriot hustler meet at the Tree of Idleness café, it’s far from love at first sight. But immediately there is something, some connection there, between them. And in the old villa, against the backdrop of good friends and old lovers coming and going, they battle with their desires and dreams until one man discovers how to live, and the other discovers how to love.


BOOK REVIEWS:

RAINBOW REVIEW BY INDIGENE, 4.5/5 STARS! "I Met A Man" is a beautifully written bittersweet story that captures the essence of the relationship between Clifford and Erol in some 70 pages all the while seamlessly inter-weaving plot and sub-plots, primary and secondary characters and their stories, feelings and relationships. There is a rhythm and flow to this story that immensely appealed to me. The story is refined and quiet in its "feel," yet the writing provokes colorful and vivid images and creates a rich sensory experience—sight, taste, touch, smell and sound. I completely lost myself in this story. "I Met A Man" is my first story by Shabbu and it was a thoroughly wonderful reading experience for me. I look forward to reading more from the writing collaboration of habu and Sabb, who I believe make an important contribution to gay literature. I strongly recommend this novella, even for those who exclusively seek "happily-ever-after" endings because despite the sadness of the story premise, it is superbly written and in the end there is a smile through the tears.


DELIGHTFUL DIVAS Review by Em Epe — RATED 4 DIVAS!(A)n incredibly deep story. (E)rotica that will leave you breathing hard but the story was woven together with emotion, anticipation and soul. I so enjoy the cadence and style of Shabbu, I look forward to reading further work. I think any reader will enjoy the time they spend reading this wonderful book!


LITEROTICA LINK:

https://www.literotica.com/s/i-met-a-man