First Story: Bunny and hubby meet a movie star and...

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kahalarich

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• Mar 19, 2018

• #1

... carnality ensues.

It's my first story for Lit, "Morning in Malibu." I hope you can check it out. Feedback welcomed.

https://www.literotica.com/s/morning-at-malibu

Enjoy!

 

ElectricBlue

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• Mar 20, 2018

• #2

Fast and efficient, good fun! Nice, brisk writing, kept simple - predictable but who cares! Five.

 

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kahalarich

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• Mar 20, 2018

• #3

electricblue66 said:

Fast and efficient, good fun! Nice, brisk writing, kept simple - predictable but who cares! Five.

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Thank you!

 

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kahalarich

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• Mar 27, 2018

• #4

Hot!

I want to thank anyone who helped my first story get a Hot rating here. What a surprise! I may have to do this again.

https://www.literotica.com/s/morning-at-malibu

 

ElectricBlue

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• Mar 27, 2018

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kahalarich said:

I want to thank anyone who helped my first story get a Hot rating here. What a surprise! I may have to do this again.

https://www.literotica.com/s/morning-at-malibu

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It's a hot, tasty little cookie! Unpretentious, with just the right amount of chocolate topping.