I have been thinking of a story that would be in the non-conscent/bdsm genre, I am unsure about the use of race as a major theme and I havn't worked all the kinks out of the story. So feedback is appreciated.
Setting: Small town with a liberal arts college at the center.
Setup: Wealthy clients pay a group of skilled opperatives to "punish" wrong doers outside of the law, usually the punishments are designed to be humiliating and harsh, but possibly preferable to long prison sentences.
Main Character: A horrible person. A Nazi sympathizer woman with blonde hair is a model student by day and a criminal by night. She wears as ski mask at night and attacks minority students, stripping them of their clothes and tying them up in the middle of the college for the students to find the next morning. She is narcisistic, and sociopathic. She dates the star quarterback for the college and despite her crimes is privately sexually submissive.
Main plot: The retrebution squad catches her red handed and gives her a deal. Either submit to their "punishment" or face a lengthy prison sentence and be a registered sex offender for life. The main character agrees to the punishments.
Punishment 1: She is forced to watch her boyfriend have sex with one of her victims, she is not allowed to orgasm.
Punishment 2: Her victims punish her in various ways(havn't really fleshed this part out.)
Punishment 3: She is forced to petition the college to allow her to be stark naked for her entire last semester of college. There is presedent for this as some students in the past had successfully petitoned a ban on nudity for a "winter solstice" festival. So the main character is forced to argue that for religious reasons she must be nude on a daily basis. She wins the case and is foced to endure an entire semester of college in the nude.
That's all I got so far. Any ideas to expand upon the story would be welcome. I don't know if maybe I should drop the race element of the story, although I like the idea of a secret Neo-Nazi getting humiliated. Maybe I should focus more on one of the victims in order to have the reader identify with a character. Anyway just thought I would throw this idea out there. I've already tried to start writing it, but it's just not a good solid idea yet.
Setting: Small town with a liberal arts college at the center.
Setup: Wealthy clients pay a group of skilled opperatives to "punish" wrong doers outside of the law, usually the punishments are designed to be humiliating and harsh, but possibly preferable to long prison sentences.
Main Character: A horrible person. A Nazi sympathizer woman with blonde hair is a model student by day and a criminal by night. She wears as ski mask at night and attacks minority students, stripping them of their clothes and tying them up in the middle of the college for the students to find the next morning. She is narcisistic, and sociopathic. She dates the star quarterback for the college and despite her crimes is privately sexually submissive.
Main plot: The retrebution squad catches her red handed and gives her a deal. Either submit to their "punishment" or face a lengthy prison sentence and be a registered sex offender for life. The main character agrees to the punishments.
Punishment 1: She is forced to watch her boyfriend have sex with one of her victims, she is not allowed to orgasm.
Punishment 2: Her victims punish her in various ways(havn't really fleshed this part out.)
Punishment 3: She is forced to petition the college to allow her to be stark naked for her entire last semester of college. There is presedent for this as some students in the past had successfully petitoned a ban on nudity for a "winter solstice" festival. So the main character is forced to argue that for religious reasons she must be nude on a daily basis. She wins the case and is foced to endure an entire semester of college in the nude.
That's all I got so far. Any ideas to expand upon the story would be welcome. I don't know if maybe I should drop the race element of the story, although I like the idea of a secret Neo-Nazi getting humiliated. Maybe I should focus more on one of the victims in order to have the reader identify with a character. Anyway just thought I would throw this idea out there. I've already tried to start writing it, but it's just not a good solid idea yet.
