Any Latin American lesbians / bi-sexual women interested in taking a look at my story

KillerRomance

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Hi everyone!

I need some help with my current manuscript. It's written in first person and the protagonist is Latina. However, I want her voice to sound authentic. If someone could have a look at the first chapter (2,000 words or so), I'd be grateful. Just some feedback and notes on where I could change the English narrative to Spanish would be very nice.

Cheers
 
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