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Moan me a tone
on how we fit together
hard teeth sharp that bite deep
moan me a groan
whisper fuck
shuck off the shackles
of ordinary
grasp the air
hold onto breath and taste the damn wall
lash the ground and pound the desk
demand the slick slope
hope that the last gasp
rasps from swollen lips
hold tight and restrain the damn wall

stick me in places almost too tight
awash in the sight of empty air
moan me the tones of pleasure
groan against the damn wall
as it bulges fit to bust a gush of
God's water
fold the edges hold
tight
take me into those forbidden places
go for the release
flow over
hold tight
come fold like origami
depth and girth so pliable
so willing flesh
out this moment
break over the damn wall

crush me
in tone and moans that go on
and come again
like waves crash against a stormy shore

todski28 said:

Moan me a tone
on how we fit together
hard teeth sharp that bite deep
moan me a groan
whisper fuck
shuck off the shackles
of the ordinary
grasp the air
hold onto breath and taste the damn wall
lash the ground and pound the desk
demand the slick slope
hope that the last gasp
rasps from swollen lips
hold tight and restrain the damn wall

stick me in places almost too tight
awash in the sight of empty air
moan me the tones of pleasure
groan against the damn wall
as it bulges fit to bust a gush of
God's water
fold the edges hold
tight
take me into those forbidden places
go for the release
flow over
hold tight
come fold like origami
depth and girth so pliable
so willing flesh
out this moment
break over the damn wall

crush me
in tone and moans that go on
and come again
like waves crash against a stormy shore

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amazing writing, tod. At first blush, I thought "well, he could have ended it after the first stanza, but then I read those killer lines "as it bulges fit to bust a gush of/God's water" and then my mind heard echoes of "o" in all the moans, groans, hold, hope, so, go, tone, swollen, and even almost and was reminded "ooh" is a sound of pleasure.

Yes yes yes yesssssss....

You know, having heard your voice I can almost hear you recite this one, and I hope you will. I can hear that lovely accent of yours roll out the tones gm points out. I may have more to say later.

todski28 said:

Moan me a tone
on how we fit together
hard teeth sharp that bite deep
moan me a groan
whisper fuck
shuck off the shackles
of the ordinary
grasp the air
hold onto breath and taste the damn wall
lash the ground and pound the desk
demand the slick slope
hope that the last gasp
rasps from swollen lips
hold tight and restrain the damn wall

stick me in places almost too tight
awash in the sight of empty air
moan me the tones of pleasure
groan against the damn wall
as it bulges fit to bust a gush of
God's water
fold the edges hold
tight
take me into those forbidden places
go for the release
flow over
hold tight
come fold like origami
depth and girth so pliable
so willing flesh
out this moment
break over the damn wall

crush me
in tone and moans that go on
and come again
like waves crash against a stormy shore

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greenmountaineer said:

amazing writing, tod. At first blush, I thought "well, he could have ended it after the first stanza, but then I read those killer lines "as it bulges fit to bust a gush of/God's water" and then my mind heard echoes of "o" in all the moans, groans, hold, hope, so, go, tone, swollen, and even almost and was reminded "ooh" is a sound of pleasure.

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Thank you GM, it's interesting when people see exactly what we were trying to accomplish in a write this one here I think will work better as spoken word, the phrases and words themselves are very predictable, simplistic but I think the sonics worked out the way I wanted them to.

legerdemer said:

Yes yes yes yesssssss....

You know, having heard your voice I can almost hear you recite this one, and I hope you will. I can hear that lovely accent of yours roll out the tones gm points out. I may have more to say later.

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How about you read it for me

todski28 said:

Thank you GM, it's interesting when people see exactly what we were trying to accomplish in a write this one here I think will work better as spoken word, the phrases and words themselves are very predictable, simplistic but I think the sonics worked out the way I wanted them to.

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After reading this post, I spent a little time reading your poem aloud, and I agree that it works really well as a spoken word. I found it interesting to see where I found I wanted to emphasize words or play with the tempo while reading. I'd love to hear your reading of it sometime, to see how you read it vs how I found myself reading it.

I liked it before, but I have a different appreciation for it now.

Lyric_Calli said:

After reading this post, I spent a little time reading your poem aloud, and I agree that it works really well as a spoken word. I found it interesting to see where I found I wanted to emphasize words or play with the tempo while reading. I'd love to hear your reading of it sometime, to see how you read it vs how I found myself reading it.

I liked it before, but I have a different appreciation for it now.

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Glad you found an oral appreciation for this piece......sorry if that sounded dirty

todski28 said:

Glad you found an oral appreciation for this piece......sorry if that sounded dirty

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I bet if you read it, I'll have an aural appreciation for it, too.

Lyric_Calli said:

I bet if you read it, I'll have an aural appreciation for it, too.

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So that's how you spell it........

todski28 said:

Moan me a tone
on how we fit together
hard teeth sharp that bite deep
moan me a groan
whisper fuck
shuck off the shackles
of ordinary
grasp the air
hold onto breath and taste the damn wall
lash the ground and pound the desk
demand the slick slope
hope that the last gasp
rasps from swollen lips
hold tight and restrain the damn wall

stick me in places almost too tight
awash in the sight of empty air
moan me the tones of pleasure
groan against the damn wall
as it bulges fit to bust a gush of
God's water
fold the edges hold
tight
take me into those forbidden places
go for the release
flow over
hold tight
come fold like origami
depth and girth so pliable
so willing flesh
out this moment
break over the damn wall

crush me
in tone and moans that go on
and come again
like waves crash against a stormy shore

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I hadn't seen any takers on doing an audio of this one... pardon the slurring sibilant shuck off the shackles. It was a fun read.

Untitled Todski Audio (read by champagne1982)

champagne1982 said:

I hadn't seen any takers on doing an audio of this one... pardon the slurring sibilant shuck off the shackles. It was a fun read.

Untitled Todski Audio (read by champagne1982)

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Mmmm! A luscious liquid read, like sitting at the lip of the ocean and letting the tide roll over you, resisting the pull but only because you want to feel it again and again.

champagne1982 said:

I hadn't seen any takers on doing an audio of this one... pardon the slurring sibilant shuck off the shackles. It was a fun read.

Untitled Todski Audio (read by champagne1982)

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An enjoyable listen. Your reading of it is different in some ways than how I read it aloud, and it was fun to hear another version. I'm glad you posted this.

Trixareforkids said:

Mmmm! A luscious liquid read, like sitting at the lip of the ocean and letting the tide roll over you, resisting the pull but only because you want to feel it again and again.

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definitely agreed with trix and Calli!!

Lyric_Calli said:

An enjoyable listen. Your reading of it is different in some ways than how I read it aloud, and it was fun to hear another version. I'm glad you posted this.

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Thank you champ that was definitely an inspired read, now I think I'm seriously going to have to re-work the interim read that I did. I'm glad you had fun

champagne1982 said:

I hadn't seen any takers on doing an audio of this one... pardon the slurring sibilant shuck off the shackles. It was a fun read.

Untitled Todski Audio (read by champagne1982)

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Simple thoughts trickle
through this simple mind
of food and work
fighting
then bam
there you are unclothed
writhing on a bed of satin laced
pillows and a come hither stare
that bares all in its naked demand

how it seems to strip back the layers
of ego and pretension
ripped back to raw
lust
and I must
take you

Feel that first thrust slowly
take hold as you
s
w
a
l
l
o
w

every damn agonising moment
I need to get to know you
your ticks and kinks
lets ride this to the edge
of my minds grasp of control
and fling ourselves entwined
into beast like growls
that groan from
moaning lips and swollen bits
all that heat
rises
before it bursts
and we gush
our overflow onto these sheets
and that stain
still
makes me hard

todski28 said:

every damn agonising moment
I need to get to know you
your ticks and kinks
lets ride this to the edge
of my minds grasp of control
and fling ourselves entwined
into beast like growls
that groan from
moaning lips and swollen bits
all that heat
rises
before it bursts
and we gush
our overflow onto these sheets
and that stain
still
makes me hard

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Ahem... pardon me while I get a glass of ice water. And a towel. Hot damn.

Removed

threes company

Nl-------------

That is too good for the just porn thread piscator!

todski28 said:

That is too good for the just porn thread piscator!

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Yeah, i enjoyed it's evolution. The quiet build into powerful waves.
But hell, tod, your's just before it was no slouch.
There's beauty in brevity

I have to agree with tod. That poem is yummy, but too subtle for anything I'd call porn. I like it a lot.

tod, Pensive and Lyri, thanks all for your kind comments, perhaps I'll try Everyday Erotics next and save the really raunchy for just porn

Still needs work...

Roll Player

I am an adventurous open minded kinky passionate man
that loves oral and all sorts of roll play.
—Line from an online personals ad.

OK, forget that "that" should be "who"—

I want to roll marbles with this man,
go bowling, toss tennis balls back and forth,
play a round of golf or bocce,
even roll down a hill like a log,
the way a ten-year-old would embrace
dizziness as verticality.

That we could tumble together,
over each other, over each other,
should cement us

like hardened epoxy
but, damn, if he's not already
bound to how he thinks of us
as girls. Well, orally, mister,

I would bite the tip off
of your presumption

and chew on your lack of understanding
of how grammar slips us all together
as mere green and intertwining leaves.

todski28 said:

Still needs work...

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Hey, that's what my t-shirt says. I'm suing you for plagarism.

The woodsmoke blaze
rising from her hearth and heart
it sears and inflames
coal glow heat a steady burn
I know
that a single kiss
when lips touch lips, and our mouths
enclose
tongues press against each other
that it will ignite a funeral pyre
where we burn unto death
enough to consume our bone's and flame the flesh

my hands force her
to her knees
and she gags on my need
strings of lust slather the fullness of my cock
she demands more,
for me to fuck her whorish mouth
to rain money down on her
so she can feel
dirty,
crawling through mud dirty

she demands my moans to pay
for her effort
so she can hear the desire as it
revebrate from my throat and thrums
the cords in her cunt

she flips on all fours and backs up
impaling herself as if driving a knife
into an open wound
I grip her hair
growl out my beastial desire
the beast she has flanked into the open
and now plans to try and tame

spit on my dick
(not that it needs anymore wet)
but she likes the heat of the drips drips
they make her hiss as if it's hot wax

We are unrehearsed flailing limbs
animals in heat
grunting out
take it all bitch, (and she does)
who's pussy is it,
smacking her arse

Until
she collapses in a melting puddle,
but I am far from finished
I lay my weight on her
and crush every ounce of
wetness from her loins
hands clasp her throat
slide a finger in her mouth
as she spasms
her hand
reaching back to try and push me
out, or pull me in
where pleasure is sin
and she knows not which way to go

I roll her over
this fuck thing that
now has no words or movement
shaking with an unrestrained mewling quiver
I own her in this moment

she reaches up
and strokes my cock reverently
and kneels to receive
my benediction

she swallows
me down
consuming me

The air smells like sex