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Old 01-19-2018, 04:43 PM   #1
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Beta reader needed for 1800 word FFF threesome story (part 1)

I have about 1800 words written so far in the first part of a 3 chapter story .

I am looking for general feedback on the subject matter and "plot" and whatever else you may want to comment on .

Id like to write 3 short stories describing three threesomes I have had. Those all occurred in my younger days before I settled down.

The first story is half written (got to a good stopping point) about a FFF threesome.
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Old 01-23-2018, 02:10 PM   #2
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Hey. Im new here and i dont have much experience but id be willing to try and help you out and read it over
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Old 01-23-2018, 02:13 PM   #3
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PM me. I'd be happy to read it and give you feedback.
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