Hi all!
So I wrote a noncon story (about the invasion of a couple's home, from the invader's point of view, 11.5k words). I got good feedback from a few readers. To get past the first rejection (flagged "scat"), I removed two sentences so that the anal scene that was problematic is now hospital clean.
But now it's been rejected for dialog editing! I had read the different tutorials though, and also followed the first readers suggestions on that. I did my best trying to edit the story, but I don't think I can make it alone (English is not my first language). I don't think there are that many problems, but well...
I've tried to reach out to two successive volunteer editors, via the list, but had no answer. Anyone willing to help me?
So I wrote a noncon story (about the invasion of a couple's home, from the invader's point of view, 11.5k words). I got good feedback from a few readers. To get past the first rejection (flagged "scat"), I removed two sentences so that the anal scene that was problematic is now hospital clean.
But now it's been rejected for dialog editing! I had read the different tutorials though, and also followed the first readers suggestions on that. I did my best trying to edit the story, but I don't think I can make it alone (English is not my first language). I don't think there are that many problems, but well...
I've tried to reach out to two successive volunteer editors, via the list, but had no answer. Anyone willing to help me?