Hi !
I would love to read a story about a young man who has recently moved to his own place and has just broken up with his girlfriend. He talks to his younger sister who still lives at home with their divorced mom and when he tells her that he's really miserable and "down", the sister tell him that their mom is probably going through the same thing after dating some guy a few times. The sister innocently tells her brother that maybe he should take their mom out, just to cheer both of them up. The brother is very hesitant about the idea but eventually he agrees when his sister keep pressing the idea. The sister then tries to plant the idea with their mom and finally mom agrees to go on a mom/son date.
The first "date" starts with the brother picking up mom. The sister tease them and tells them that they look cute together. Things like that. She's having a lot of fun with the whole "date" thing.
The first date is nice but quite un-eventful and when it's finished they say a chaste mother/son goodbye.
When mom comes home the sister asks her about the date and mom tell her that it was really nice and that her son had been a real gentleman and very nice company. Over the coming week she keep mentioning the date several times.
The sister later tell her brother about their mom, telling him that he must have made quite a impression on her since she keep talking about the date all the time. The sister suggests that he could maybe ask her again. She tells him that it was a long time since mom was this happy and she was sure that it was because of their date. The son call his mom and asks her out on a second date.
Things then slowly pregresses until mom and son are dating each other for real and mom even sleeps over at the son's apartment and the son sleeps at his mom's house (in her bedroom). Things like that. The sister still keep teasing them about their dates although she now realizes that they are dating for real. She can see that mom comes home before a date with new lingerie or a new dress, that she is more interested in her appearance, that she talks to her son on the phone a lot. At some point mom and son start getting physical in the presence of the sister. She feels a little awkward at first but she's happy for them and tries to be casual about it. Soon she doesn't even think about it when she sees her mom and brother snuggling and maybe even kissing on their sofa.
Okay...that's a few fragment of my idea. Basically, it's a romantic story about a young man and his mom where the daughter/sister is the one who encourages their relationship. She is happy for both of them and although it feels a little awkward at first, she accepts that they have a romantic relationship.
What do you think ? Is this something that could be developed into a story ?
/steve
I would love to read a story about a young man who has recently moved to his own place and has just broken up with his girlfriend. He talks to his younger sister who still lives at home with their divorced mom and when he tells her that he's really miserable and "down", the sister tell him that their mom is probably going through the same thing after dating some guy a few times. The sister innocently tells her brother that maybe he should take their mom out, just to cheer both of them up. The brother is very hesitant about the idea but eventually he agrees when his sister keep pressing the idea. The sister then tries to plant the idea with their mom and finally mom agrees to go on a mom/son date.
The first "date" starts with the brother picking up mom. The sister tease them and tells them that they look cute together. Things like that. She's having a lot of fun with the whole "date" thing.
The first date is nice but quite un-eventful and when it's finished they say a chaste mother/son goodbye.
When mom comes home the sister asks her about the date and mom tell her that it was really nice and that her son had been a real gentleman and very nice company. Over the coming week she keep mentioning the date several times.
The sister later tell her brother about their mom, telling him that he must have made quite a impression on her since she keep talking about the date all the time. The sister suggests that he could maybe ask her again. She tells him that it was a long time since mom was this happy and she was sure that it was because of their date. The son call his mom and asks her out on a second date.
Things then slowly pregresses until mom and son are dating each other for real and mom even sleeps over at the son's apartment and the son sleeps at his mom's house (in her bedroom). Things like that. The sister still keep teasing them about their dates although she now realizes that they are dating for real. She can see that mom comes home before a date with new lingerie or a new dress, that she is more interested in her appearance, that she talks to her son on the phone a lot. At some point mom and son start getting physical in the presence of the sister. She feels a little awkward at first but she's happy for them and tries to be casual about it. Soon she doesn't even think about it when she sees her mom and brother snuggling and maybe even kissing on their sofa.
Okay...that's a few fragment of my idea. Basically, it's a romantic story about a young man and his mom where the daughter/sister is the one who encourages their relationship. She is happy for both of them and although it feels a little awkward at first, she accepts that they have a romantic relationship.
What do you think ? Is this something that could be developed into a story ?
/steve