I wrote the episode 2 of a fantasy erotica about a Ranger who gets captured by Drow and used by breeding stock. The story is done, but if anyone wants to give it a quick read i'd be grateful. The first episode can be read on my profile if needed. I can also send it as well.
My main questions are the following:
- I have no idea where the story is going after Kalan escapes from Garthrand
- I think I may have included a scene of Orc sex which is a bit more like a rape scene, and I'm not sure if its okay to post that.
- I got a bit carried away while writing this and I think I made it less of an erotica, and more of an action story with a few sex scenes.
So I'd like to add more sex, make a plot, and maybe tone down the Orc scene. The story is currently 23 word pages in size 11 font, but there's a lot of dialogue. I can send via any way.
My main questions are the following:
- I have no idea where the story is going after Kalan escapes from Garthrand
- I think I may have included a scene of Orc sex which is a bit more like a rape scene, and I'm not sure if its okay to post that.
- I got a bit carried away while writing this and I think I made it less of an erotica, and more of an action story with a few sex scenes.
So I'd like to add more sex, make a plot, and maybe tone down the Orc scene. The story is currently 23 word pages in size 11 font, but there's a lot of dialogue. I can send via any way.
