Bebop3
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Oct 24, 2017
- Posts
- 293
Hi,
I'd like to get a fresh pair of eyes on a story I'm working on that will be going in the incest/taboo category.
It's about 8,000 words and is the first of three chapters.
I'm much more concerned with general feedback about characters, story arc and dialogue than I am about grammar, spelling, etc.
Please lmk if you have any questions.
I'd like to get a fresh pair of eyes on a story I'm working on that will be going in the incest/taboo category.
It's about 8,000 words and is the first of three chapters.
I'm much more concerned with general feedback about characters, story arc and dialogue than I am about grammar, spelling, etc.
Please lmk if you have any questions.
