I've been fan of Literotica for years. I grew up reading Penthouse Forum and other magazines that actually required you to read. Anyway, this is my first published story and I would love some feedback. If your looking for hardcore grinding sex, this is not the story for you. If you're looking for a little voyeurism with some creative fantasy, you may find this interesting. I wrote it about an ex girlfriend who actually made this trip. The story I describe is my fantasy and she had massive orgasms after reading it. Feedback please.
Trinity's Continuing Education
http://www.literotica.com/s/trinitys-continuing-education
Trinity's Continuing Education
http://www.literotica.com/s/trinitys-continuing-education