TriXteRPhillips
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Writer Seeking Editor(s) to Edit and Advise Me on My Literotica Author’s Bio
OLD TITLE: Looking for Editor: My Literotica Author's Bio
UPDATE 7-11-2018:
It appears that my initial post somehow gives some readers the impression that I am an editor in search of writers in need of an editor. Such is not the case. My apologies to those readers left with that impression after reading the original post. I hope the following sections of this update clarifies a) what I seek and b) provides enough information for respondents to offer relevant edits and/or advice.
Important facts about myself and my experience I want to convey through the bio:
What I seek in edits and advice:
Final thoughts before finishing this update
I understand that my education level and lack of experience create obstacles and hurdles for me as fledgling writer and potential persons interested in working with or guiding me to one degree or another.
Nevertheless, I feel that the above hindrances will decrease with time as my skills improve and my knowledge increases in the coming weeks, months, and years.
In the meantime, I feel that being forthcoming about my weaknesses as well as honest about my strengths is overall best. I don’t want to waste anyone’s time and energy on needless pursuits.
Finally, I know this is a lot of thought and effort to put into an author’s bio for Literotica. (I only looked at a few profiles, but the majority lacked one.) But, for me, it is an opportunity to learn new things and gain some experience in interacting with editors.
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I've taken this piece as far as I can. If anyone would like to offer any style or editorial or other suggestions, I would greatly appreciate any constructive comments below.
Feel free to ask me questions, not knowing much about me could leave some folks unsure of what advice, if any, to give me.
(Below the draft in question are the notes I used to compose this bio, a link to the original article is provided.)
Draft 11
TriXteR Phillips recently began writing flash fiction erotica, flirotica. He currently focuses on a set of interrelated stories that explore the relationship between two main characters through their kinks and fetishes. He utilized innate creativity and talent useful to tabletop RPG players to aide this ninth-grade dropout turned part-time English student in transitioning to one-time amateur blogger, and, now, to novice writer. He overcomes lifestyle inexperience with a willingness to learn while exploring the various facets of BDSM. He writes fliroticas at this time to learn and practice writing fiction and further study English. Want to participate in the creative or learning processes? Learn more by sending him a message through the Contact form.
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I based the bio of the following notes taken from this article I found online while researching how to write an author bio [UPDATED: 07-11-2018]: XXXXX
Checklist
Third person
List only provable facts, not necessary for the facts to be easily provable on the internet
Pertinent education and experience
Memberships if any, for now, Literotica Bulletin Board
Keep sentences tight
Hook, grab, hold
“Denise Rutledge has been working with writing challenged clients for over four years. (How long you’ve been providing a service is useful information.) She provides ghost writing, coaching and ghost editing services. (What your services are is also useful) Her educational background in family science and journalism has given her a broad base from which to approach many topics. (Education and experience.) Her writing skills may be confirmed independently on Literotica is not a place to promote other websites. (Provable facts.) She especially enjoys preparing resumes for individuals who are changing
careers. (Hook, grab and hold.) You may learn more about her services at XXXXX . (Second hook, grab and hold.)”
“Writing challenged clients” in the opening sentence is also a potential hook, grab and hold.
“Jane Doe writes SEO articles for businesses that want to see their Google search rankings surge.(What she does.) Her articles have appeared in a number of e-zine sites, including XXXX (Way to confirm her skills.) She contributes articles about SEO techniques regularly to XXXXXX. (Her experience level.) Her articles focus on balancing informative with SEO needs–but never at the expense of providing an entertaining read. (There’s the hook.) Learn more about how Jane’s SEO articles could grow your
business by visiting her blog at XXXXXX
You might notice that neither example includes a membership. If a rule doesn’t apply, don’t worry about it. If you have to weigh which is more valuable, experience always wins.
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OLD TITLE: Looking for Editor: My Literotica Author's Bio
UPDATE 7-11-2018:
It appears that my initial post somehow gives some readers the impression that I am an editor in search of writers in need of an editor. Such is not the case. My apologies to those readers left with that impression after reading the original post. I hope the following sections of this update clarifies a) what I seek and b) provides enough information for respondents to offer relevant edits and/or advice.
Important facts about myself and my experience I want to convey through the bio:
- Ninth grade dropout (A fact I feel is important so that people have an idea of what they may be getting into with me as a writer.)
- Imaginative person with a knack or talent for writing (Facts I think are important. I mention creativity as I feel it is an asset, but, come to think of it, that asset may well be an asset all (good) writers possess. I mention I’ve been encouraged on more than one occasion to pursue writing, it seemed like mentioning this apparent talent in some way would add relevant information.)
- Former/semi-retired tabletop RPG player (For experience I mention RPGs were outlets for my imagination and desire to create characters, build worlds, and tell stories. Though, it is not easily verified online.)
- Self-taught, part-time, still-learning English student (Another fact about myself that I feel is important to know about me up front.)
- Willing to put in the time and effort necessary to both further my knowledge and comprehension of English and hone my skills and talents as a writer to produce quality works
- Self-published, former blogger (A point of experience. The blog is still up but not active, so it is easily verifiable online.)
- Focus is now on writing and learning how to write fictions. Specifically and currently, through the genre of flash fiction eroticas--fliroticas
- Seeking readers, writers, editors, and others interested in participating in and/or contributing to my creative process for Literotica projects and/or education in/knowledge of the English language.
What I seek in edits and advice:
- For partial of full edits, if possible, I would prefer “submissions” to have the edited/changed sections underscored and strike throughs on entire deletions for use as visual references when comparing your draft to the original. (To be honest, I am unfamiliar with posting to forums, this request may be too much to ask, let me know in your reply if this is the case.)
- For advice, regardless of whether or not it accompanies any edits, I would appreciate, however brief or lengthy your reply, if you include as much of the following as possible:
[*]I would feedback such as your reasoning behind the changes, or lack thereof, that you suggest;.
[*]The relevant rules or guidelines that inform your suggestions, glaring violations of the rules of the road such as mixing up tenses, comma splicing, or whatever drives you up a wall;
[*]The inclusion of links to pertinent reference materials;
[*]Any other constructive observations or pointers.
[*]For those who have already replied, to make it easier on you, feel free to edit your original comment with underscored text to visually highlight your new thoughts, if you have any, that is
Final thoughts before finishing this update
I understand that my education level and lack of experience create obstacles and hurdles for me as fledgling writer and potential persons interested in working with or guiding me to one degree or another.
Nevertheless, I feel that the above hindrances will decrease with time as my skills improve and my knowledge increases in the coming weeks, months, and years.
In the meantime, I feel that being forthcoming about my weaknesses as well as honest about my strengths is overall best. I don’t want to waste anyone’s time and energy on needless pursuits.
Finally, I know this is a lot of thought and effort to put into an author’s bio for Literotica. (I only looked at a few profiles, but the majority lacked one.) But, for me, it is an opportunity to learn new things and gain some experience in interacting with editors.
###
I've taken this piece as far as I can. If anyone would like to offer any style or editorial or other suggestions, I would greatly appreciate any constructive comments below.
Feel free to ask me questions, not knowing much about me could leave some folks unsure of what advice, if any, to give me.
(Below the draft in question are the notes I used to compose this bio, a link to the original article is provided.)
Draft 11
TriXteR Phillips recently began writing flash fiction erotica, flirotica. He currently focuses on a set of interrelated stories that explore the relationship between two main characters through their kinks and fetishes. He utilized innate creativity and talent useful to tabletop RPG players to aide this ninth-grade dropout turned part-time English student in transitioning to one-time amateur blogger, and, now, to novice writer. He overcomes lifestyle inexperience with a willingness to learn while exploring the various facets of BDSM. He writes fliroticas at this time to learn and practice writing fiction and further study English. Want to participate in the creative or learning processes? Learn more by sending him a message through the Contact form.
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I based the bio of the following notes taken from this article I found online while researching how to write an author bio [UPDATED: 07-11-2018]: XXXXX
Checklist
Third person
List only provable facts, not necessary for the facts to be easily provable on the internet
Pertinent education and experience
Memberships if any, for now, Literotica Bulletin Board
Keep sentences tight
Hook, grab, hold
“Denise Rutledge has been working with writing challenged clients for over four years. (How long you’ve been providing a service is useful information.) She provides ghost writing, coaching and ghost editing services. (What your services are is also useful) Her educational background in family science and journalism has given her a broad base from which to approach many topics. (Education and experience.) Her writing skills may be confirmed independently on Literotica is not a place to promote other websites. (Provable facts.) She especially enjoys preparing resumes for individuals who are changing
careers. (Hook, grab and hold.) You may learn more about her services at XXXXX . (Second hook, grab and hold.)”
“Writing challenged clients” in the opening sentence is also a potential hook, grab and hold.
“Jane Doe writes SEO articles for businesses that want to see their Google search rankings surge.(What she does.) Her articles have appeared in a number of e-zine sites, including XXXX (Way to confirm her skills.) She contributes articles about SEO techniques regularly to XXXXXX. (Her experience level.) Her articles focus on balancing informative with SEO needs–but never at the expense of providing an entertaining read. (There’s the hook.) Learn more about how Jane’s SEO articles could grow your
business by visiting her blog at XXXXXX
You might notice that neither example includes a membership. If a rule doesn’t apply, don’t worry about it. If you have to weigh which is more valuable, experience always wins.
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