carolinahusband
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- Oct 29, 2006
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Long Time Reader, First Time Author
I am a happily-married 39 year-old male and just had my first-ever attempt at writing erotic fiction posted on Literotica. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it. Feedback from both veteran and beginning authors is greatly appreciated as I hope to continue the series on a regular basis. I would especially appreciate hearing from the female writers as to my overall writing style/descriptions and your reaction to the story.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=282800
Thanks in advance for your comments!
I am a happily-married 39 year-old male and just had my first-ever attempt at writing erotic fiction posted on Literotica. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it. Feedback from both veteran and beginning authors is greatly appreciated as I hope to continue the series on a regular basis. I would especially appreciate hearing from the female writers as to my overall writing style/descriptions and your reaction to the story.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=282800
Thanks in advance for your comments!
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