ClosetCFNM
Virgin
- Joined
- Apr 25, 2016
- Posts
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I've been reading Literotica for several years now and finally decided to contribute. It's a CFNM story inspired by real life events. I've completed 5 out of an estimated 10 chapters, though only 3 have been published so far.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3167474&page=submissions
I'm curious about who likes my story and who doesn't (and why). It's not a typical CFNM story, but rather a much more milder version that I think is grounded in reality. It's also sort of a coming-of-age tale.
I've already received feedback that the chapters are too short, and I agree. I intended this to be daily short chapters, given the underlying intent of teasing the reader. Little did I know then that publication can take several days. Probably won't do this format again.
I'm interested in knowing:
- Did you find it realistic?
- Could you identify with the characters?
- If you enjoyed the story, were you already into CFNM?
- Any other feedback
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3167474&page=submissions
I'm curious about who likes my story and who doesn't (and why). It's not a typical CFNM story, but rather a much more milder version that I think is grounded in reality. It's also sort of a coming-of-age tale.
I've already received feedback that the chapters are too short, and I agree. I intended this to be daily short chapters, given the underlying intent of teasing the reader. Little did I know then that publication can take several days. Probably won't do this format again.
I'm interested in knowing:
- Did you find it realistic?
- Could you identify with the characters?
- If you enjoyed the story, were you already into CFNM?
- Any other feedback