sr71plt
Literotica Guru
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- Jul 18, 2006
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You've written 11,000 words, filling out your story, since you asked for suggestions four hours ago, giving a very bare-bones statement of the scenario? That's hard to believe. You wasted our time and effort on a hopelessly incomplete scenario and later added more detail that you apparently had already written. You wasted everyone's time and effort who responded to your OP in good faith. So, go fish.