RocketLauncher
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I published a few stories and the general consensus is stop torturing my muse. I would be grateful for any feedback or suggestions as I obviously need to improve my writing skills. My first submission, with many grammatical errors was moderately well received. My last submission, not so much. Thanks in advance to anyone willing to peruse it and comment.
https://www.literotica.com/s/party-favour-ch-02
https://www.literotica.com/s/party-favour-ch-02