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Old 01-08-2018, 06:10 AM   #51
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A poem I wrote ...

To My Anonymous Commenter

Gentle reader, oh how very far
You've come to damn me with 1 star.
I see that you don't share my kinks,
And thus opine, my story stinks.
My words were penned with great care, but
Did not help you to bust a nut.
Perhaps I'm just too erudite,
Or else, you're just not stroking right.
You say my writing's horrid fluff,
But you still stop to read my stuff,
And comment how you hate a cuck,
And how my wordsmithing doth suck.
But this one fact lessens the sting:
You haven't writ a God damn thing.

-avenger5, 2018
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Old 01-14-2018, 07:49 PM   #52
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That's beautiful. Totally using that but will absolutely credit you
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Old 01-16-2018, 06:15 AM   #53
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That's beautiful. Totally using that but will absolutely credit you
Thanks.
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Old 01-16-2018, 01:55 PM   #54
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Originally Posted by avengerfive View Post
To My Anonymous Commenter

Gentle reader, oh how very far
You've come to damn me with 1 star.
I see that you don't share my kinks,
And thus opine, my story stinks.
My words were penned with great care, but
Did not help you to bust a nut.
Perhaps I'm just too erudite,
Or else, you're just not stroking right.
You say my writing's horrid fluff,
But you still stop to read my stuff,
And comment how you hate a cuck,
And how my word-smithing doth suck.
But this one fact lessens the sting:
You haven't writ a God damn thing.

-avenger5, 2018

That's a masterpiece !
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Old 01-16-2018, 02:15 PM   #55
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Originally Posted by avengerfive View Post
To My Anonymous Commenter

Gentle reader, oh how very far
You've come to damn me with 1 star.
I see that you don't share my kinks,
And thus opine, my story stinks.
My words were penned with great care, but
Did not help you to bust a nut.
Perhaps I'm just too erudite,
Or else, you're just not stroking right.
You say my writing's horrid fluff,
But you still stop to read my stuff,
And comment how you hate a cuck,
And how my wordsmithing doth suck.
But this one fact lessens the sting:
You haven't writ a God damn thing.

-avenger5, 2018
That's terrific. Says it all.
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