loquere
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I think it works better as a lesbian story.
A LESBIAN story is just a whole different animal. For me a proper LESBIAN tale would have to be careful & respectful etc. YellowBarroned's story is one of raw wam-bam lust. Much like many already on Literotica, but from his point of view.
Maybe YellowBarroned is Indian or Asian. When he reads these Lit hot/coed/cheerleader stories he can't picture himself. He's being marginalized. The answer isn't to marginalize him further by completely changing the core of the story.
-YellowBarroned is writing his version & I'm writing my own. Your free to write your lesbian version if your inclined, after all no one owns this idea.
-MY STORY WILL BE AN ALL ANAL STORY: NO KISSING NO BLOW-JOBS, NO BLOW JOBS, NO LUBE. JUST SPHINCTER PENETRATION & ASSHOLE SLAMMING.
-My version will not be exact
-No giant cock
-His parents emigrated from India to Kansas City Missouri, where he was born & raised.
-He's smart skipped 2 grades in elementary school. He is currently a 20 yearsold BIO-CHEM major at a great eastern UNI (Keep that & other developments on a need to know.)
-The girl is still the beautiful blonde
-She's smart as well
-Keeping the yoga
--> There is a lot more as this is to feed into an older series idea I had