steve44uk
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- Jul 4, 2010
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Do it, Slyc! I love good superhero stories!
And yes, Steve, I understand you're a fan. I'd love to hear what you think of mine, whenever you get a chance. Do you think the "setting" needs to be set up more? In each chapter, more of that world will be revealed, but it will always be more about the scene and the sex than the background...
Read it and really enjoyed it! I tried to leave a comment but my phone was being a dick. I'll do so later. And no, part of my comment was, essentially, "less is more." You told us enough to make the story work and not a penny more. That left me hungry for the next chapter, which I assume was your intent. Brava.
Hey, slyc. FAWC keeping you busy...?
john - glad the cats are ok, and I'll keep my fingers crossed for the show.