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John988
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Hey everyone,
I have a story that I posted a while back and have made extensive edits and some additions to, and I'm going to re-upload it. Before I do that, I'd appreciate hearing what people think to see if there are some more edits I want to include in this draft. I've edited it myself for grammar and whatnot, so all I'm really looking for is your opinions on readability, interest, etc. Message me if you'd like a copy.
Thank you!
John
I have a story that I posted a while back and have made extensive edits and some additions to, and I'm going to re-upload it. Before I do that, I'd appreciate hearing what people think to see if there are some more edits I want to include in this draft. I've edited it myself for grammar and whatnot, so all I'm really looking for is your opinions on readability, interest, etc. Message me if you'd like a copy.
Thank you!
John
