Long term editor wanted, female writer

I've just had my first story posted on here. literotica.com/s/jeffs-story

I have several other stories I have written that I want to submit. I love English and know how to use spell check. I will also read over my story several times before I send it to you, so there shouldn't be too many grammar issues. I am looking more for someone to help with content. I was told I use too many words and I "show more than tell." I would love someone who could edit stories live in google docs while I watch, so I am able to learn from you.

I would like to read some of your stories before committing to you, to make sure we are on the same page.

Thank you! Hope to hear from you soon.

Adelyn

I haven't been an active contributor here, but would be happy to be an editor to help out. As a writer, I am woefully unable to edit my own things well - so I know where you are coming from. I'm much better at editing other people's things.

I haven't used Google Docs before for 'live' editing.. though. I usually like to print something out, and go old school with a red pen.. then go through the edits/fixes from there.

Let me know if you'd want to try it out.

still need an editor? PM me

I've found someone. His writing style is very similar to my own. Thank you!!!